Naruto Suggestion:Killer Bee

Killer Bee
The Hachibi Jinchuriki

Agi Char

Power:A
Speed:A
Vitality:B
Intelegence:D

Stats:
Str:17
Agi:23
Int:13

Char Desc:
Killer Bee, along with his older brother A, are the sons of the Third Raikage. From the age of five, Bee has been best friends with Motoi, whom he always greeted with a fist bump. After the Eight-Tailed Giant Ox lost control and killed Motoi's father, the Third Raikage chose to seal it inside Bee with the Iron Armour Seal. Soon afterwards, Bee suffered from similar prejudices against jinchūriki, not too different from that the villagers of Konohagakure and Sunagakure had against Naruto Uzumaki and Gaara respectively.

Default skill:
Seven Swords Dance(passive):
Killer Bee goes into a pose with his seven swords. He holds a blade at both his elbow joints, one at his left armpit, one in his mouth, one in his right neck joint, one between his stomach and one at his right leg. As strange as it seems, Killer Bee is very skilled with these blades, and spins in a manner similar to a buzz saw, leaving no opening for even a skilled Sharingan user like Sasuke Uchiha and a highly trained swordsman like Suigetsu Hōzuki.
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10% chance to deal a 2nd attack on the opponent dealing 1X Agi dmg

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Skill 1:
Ink Spurt(active):
Bee, since his biju is an octipus/bull is able to form ink in his mouth
in which he can use as a makeshift pencil or a escape distraction
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Bee spurts ink in 600 aoe if he is inside that aoe he becomes invis for
5 seconds also slows enemy by X% for 5 seconds
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Level 1:Slows enemy by 10%
Level 2:Slows enemy by 20%
Level 3:Slows enemy by 30%
Level 4:Slows enemy by 40%
-24/22/20/18 sec cd

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Skill 2:
Biju Transformation(active,transformation):
By tapping into the Eight-Tails' chakra reserves, Killer Bee can enter his "version 2" forms. As stated by Sabu, this is done by forming the chakra into a human shape. These transformations are meant to give him an edge in battle without completely releasing the Eight-Tails, as that would endanger anyone around him. To transform into Version 2, Bee forms eight Version 1 tails and wraps them around his body transforming him into Version 2, creating a crater underneath him. He can also enter Version 2 from his full Eight-Tailed Giant Ox form.
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Gives As and ms and gives default skill Lariat (level 1-2 is level 1 trans and level 3-4 is level 2 trans
like gokus ss)
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Level 1:Gives 10% AS 5% MS Lasts 15 Secs
Level 2:Gives 20% AS 10% MS Lasts 20 Secs
Level 3:Gives 30% AS 15% MS Lasts 25 Secs
Level 4:Gives 40% AS 20% MS Lasts 30 Secs

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

-70/65/60/55 sec cd


Transformation Skill:Lariat(active):
The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. In Killer Bee's Version 2, the Lariat's speed and power increase tremendously due to the ox-skull he creates. He was able to dent Samehada while simultaneously blowing away Kisame Hoshigaki's chest.
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Deals Biju trans lvl X150 in dmg chance to crit hit dealing 1.5X dmg (5% chance)
-20 sec cd

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Skill 3:
Tentacle Grasp(active):
Bee can summon the eight tail's tentacles out of his back he can summon up to eight of them
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he holds up to eight enemys in 500 AOE with his tentacles and deals 100dps but bee cannot move
during this move and is vunerable during this move so he gets -4 armour
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Level 1:Holds for 1 second
Level 2:Holds for 2 seconds
Level 3:Holds for 3 seconds
Level 4:Holds for 4 seconds
-28/26/24/22 sec cd

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Ultimate:
Bijudama/Bijubomb(active):
The Bijudama is the ultimate attack of a tailed beast. To form the attack, they gather both positive black chakra, and negative white chakra , shape it into a sphere, and then compress it inside their mouth. The black and white chakra needs to be balanced at an 8:2 ratio respectively or it will backfire. The power of the attack is also relative to the power of the user. The tailed beasts' jinchūriki can use this ability, though they need to be in their full tailed beast forms.
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Bee transforms into his full tailed beast state and charges for 2 seconds then unleases a powerful blast
Level 1:Deals 400 dmg in a line
Level 1:Deals 800 dmg in a line
Level 1:Deals 1200 dmg in a line
-160/120/80 sec cd

Spoiler:

Ps:I REAALY need to stop putting suggestions lol

Code:

Changlelog v1.0
-Changed to agi char
-put skill 3 aoe
-changed skill 2 duration and cd
-increased ulti charge time
-added img for skill 1,3 and trans skill

yes @ ur P.S :P, but we need somebody to suggest don't we? :)

1)Though....I think Killer Bee should be an AGI hero, not STR.

2) Also i think that:
Skill 2:
Biju Transformation(active,transformation)
should last at least 25-30(or even increases per level) seconds.(cause like the more time u spend practicing it, u should be able to control it better, rite?)
and CD should be like... 60/60/70/75 Or 60/60/60/60.

3) Skill 3:
Tentacle Grasp(active):

Just brainstorming about this one but, im suggesting u change the skill to a skill where the 8 tentacles come out of Killer Bee and attacking units in an area of about.... 500 AOE,

doing 'X' damage per level and,

mb idk about 'Y%'(mb 2%) chance for each tentacle to stun the target for a tiny 0.01 seconds, or 'Y%' chance to maim the targets by 'Z%'

and they have 'Z%' AS....mb the AS of a level 1 hero for each 1.

4) i think Bijubomb should charge atleast 2 seconds :P

P.S when i suggest stuff and comment on ur suggestions, i mean no offense when i try correct them or such :p

1)Though....I think Killer Bee should be an AGI hero, not STR.

i thought of that aswell but i wasnt sure so i left it to ppls comments... ill change it

2) Also i think that:
Skill 2:
Biju Transformation(active,transformation)
should last at least 25-30(or even increases per level) seconds.(cause like the more time u spend practicing it, u should be able to control it better, rite?)
and CD should be like... 60/60/70/75 Or 60/60/60/60.

ill put it to 15-20-25-30 secs duration and 70-65-60-55 secs cd cause if u learn a skill and practice it more u will be able to use it more and more with lower intervals between use

3) Skill 3:
Tentacle Grasp(active):

Just brainstorming about this one but, im suggesting u change the skill to a skill where the 8 tentacles come out of Killer Bee and attacking units in an area of about.... 500 AOE,

doing 'X' damage per level and,

mb idk about 'Y%'(mb 2%) chance for each tentacle to stun the target for a tiny 0.01 seconds, or 'Y%' chance to maim the targets by 'Z%'

and they have 'Z%' AS....mb the AS of a level 1 hero for each 1.

why would they have as the come out of bees back XD anyway if u have eight tentacles attacking and u use ink spurt it would be prettey imba ill add an aoe to it anyway

) i think Bijubomb should charge atleast 2 seconds Razz

i was sure i put 2 secs O_o oh well ill change it

-no offence tooken ur being helpul :D

EDIT:Added img for lariat,ink and tentacle grasp

"why would they have as the come out of bees back XD anyway if u have eight tentacles attacking and u use ink spurt it would be prettey imba ill add an aoe to it anyway"



Well..yeah come out of his back :P....(the spell i suggested) nah it wouldnt be so imba just because he is invisible, its not that hard to counter somebody u can't see with the heroes u have in this game lol,also cause late game that 3rd skill would be kinda useless since its lvl 1 AS throughout and if doesn't last long, all the more better for other opponents, so only the small stun will be useful throughout game, and killing him before that...i doubt its that much of a problem :|, would be better also if he could'nt use that spell when in his Transformation spell, i think its fine :P. I was thinking about this for a while but there hasn't been cases of heroes with invisibility but Valk should add Dust and Gem of true sight like in DotA.

hmm ur 3rd skill edit is funnier now and scarier now :D

yh i read wrong i was thinking about ms and i writ it wrong aswell lol.. anyway i went on what i usaly do 1 attack skill (well lariat during trans) 1 assist skill (ink) and 1 assist/dmg skill (tentacle hold) and ther ultimate but now im thinking he needs a normal aoe spell to farm =/ lol also he can use the tendris anytime he wants like he does in manga

sooo..... whats ur point? :\

dunno... xD

Bump.. like usual these topics get ignored unless i do this XD

well its cuz valk isnt always around like us and doesnt really post any updates or such cant there isnt any... soooo nobody really comes every now and then to check

I come. And i don't think valk will add this in 1.8 because he want to release it fast. Maybe in 1.9 if it will be enough space it will be added.

i always around here. just dont post. i can add killer bee in 1.9 :) good suggestion

yay :cheers:

mhm being around when nobody knows and not posting is the same as being not around..... u have to post to be noticed :p. I think i would like Raikage added instead of than killer bee, but in 1.8 :p