[Mahou Shoujo Kirara To Sarara] Hoshizora Sarara

Hoshizora Sarara the Long-Range Bombardier

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Background Story:
Sarara Hoshizora is a leading character from the visual novel Magical Girl Kirara and Sarara. She is specialized in long range combat. Consequently, her melee capabilities are quite poor, which puts her at a disadvantage in close combat. However, in spite of such melee capabilities weaknesses, she is able to send a controllable puron strafe upon the target, or to protect her allies, aswell as dealing massive damage from distance with her Azure bow.

Stats
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Base Damage
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Defense
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Move Speed
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Attack Range: 700

Stats growth
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Extra Information:
Movement Speed: 300 MS.
Attack Animation: 0,3 / 0,5
Casting animation: 0,3 / 0,5
Base Attack Time: 1,45
Missile speed: 600-800 MS.
Sarara will begin with 30 Mana, also with 1 Mana Regen/Second.

Default Skill: Flying System [Active][Damage Type: None]
At first sight, Sarara seems to be a regular little girl, but this changed when she found a magical ring, called Azure, granting her magical powers, between others, the capacity to fly at high speed despite of carrying a huge blue colored armor and Azure bow with her.
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When activated grants the ability to fly.
Increases MS by 150.
Cannot be slowed.
Consumes 2 mana/second.

Cooldown: 2,5 seconds.

Detailed Information:
Takes 1 second to reach max height.
Does not trigger Alastor.
Cannot regenerate mana when Flying System is activated.
Flies over impassible terrains and over units.


1st Skill: Energy Sphere [Active][Damage Type: Chaos, Uknown]
Sarara channels pure energy, creating into her right hand a powerful energy sphere, releasing it upon the target area. The energy is released with such strength, that the particles left begin to suck nearby enemies, aswell as creating 2 particle waves around the initial sphere, which will be expanded and contracted once, in order to deal damage.
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Initial sphere sucks nearby enemies within 300 AoE. Lasts 3 seconds.
Particle waves are expanded and contracted once each, dealing damage twice.
Max AoE 600.
The further enemies are from particle waves, the lesser DMG they take.
Cast Range 500.
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Lvl 1: Initial sphere sucks with 200 strength. Particle Waves deal 50-100 DMG every hit.
Lvl 2: Initial sphere sucks with 275 strength. Particle Waves deal 75-150 DMG every hit.
Lvl 3: Initial sphere sucks with 350 strength. Particle Waves deal 100-200 DMG every hit.
Lvl 4: Initial sphere sucks with 425 strength. Particle Waves deal 125-250 DMG every hit.
Lvl 5: Initial sphere sucks with 500 strength. Particle Waves deal 150-300 DMG every hit.

Cooldown: X seconds.

Detailed Information:
Total hits dealt by Particle Waves are 4.
Sucking Strength E.G.
Note: Enemy MS = 300.
Sucks with 200 strength: Enemy MS (300) minus Sucking Strength (200) = Enemy will be able to move at 100 MS.
Sucks with 500 strength: Enemy MS (300) minus Sucking Strength (500) = Enemy will be pulled to the sphere with -200 MS, which means pulled with 200 MS.
Obviously, if MS result is negative, the hero cannot move, and he will be pulled to the sphere.
Cannot cast spells while being sucked.
Particle Waves takes 0,5 sec to realise every action.
E.G. Initial sphere hits. After this, the sucking effect will be activated, and particle waves will begin to Expand and Contract. After 2 seconds (0,5s for every action, total 4 actions), the Expansion and Contraction will finish, and Particle Waves disappear. Sucking effect will disappear 3 seconds after this skill hits.

2nd Skill: Puron Tenkai [Active][Damage Type: Chaos, Uknown]
Sarara releases 12 funnel-shaped controllable assaulting devices from her bow, called Puron, for either offensive or defensive purpose. It can be used to attack the desired target from afar, or creates energy-based barrier to fend off incoming attacks.
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Releases 12 Purons.
Deals damage and stuns if the target is a foe and creates a barrier if the target is an ally.
Cast Range 600.
Barrier lasts 10 seconds.
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Lvl 1: Deals 400 DMG and stuns for 1 second or Absorbs up to 600 DMG.
Lvl 2: Deals 600 DMG and stuns for 1,25 seconds or Absorbs up to 900 DMG.
Lvl 3: Deals 800 DMG and stuns for 1,5 seconds or Absorbs up to 1200 DMG.
Lvl 4: Deals 1000 DMG and stuns for 1,75 seconds or Absorbs up to 1500 DMG.
Lvl 5: Deals 1200 DMG and stuns for 2 seconds or Absorbs up to 1800 DMG.

Cooldown: 20 Seconds.

Images:
Offensive Puron

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Defensive Puron:

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Detailed Information:
Barrier cannot be dispelled.

3rd Skill: Azure's Enchanted Soul [Passive][Damage Type: Hero]
In mythology, Azure was a dragon with unimaginable power. It is said that even the tiniest fragment of Azure's power can grant its holder immeasurable prowess. This little fragment, which is residing within Sarara's magical ring, is much more than enough to enchant her bow, being able to release Azure's breath itself.
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Azure's power surrounds Sarara's bow, granting her the ability to damage all non-allied units in a straight line of 700 range and 200 AoE.
Stacks with some Orb Effects and Buff Placers.
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Lvl 1: Damage dealt on the line is reduced by 70%.
Lvl 2: Damage dealt on the line is reduced by 65%.
Lvl 3: Damage dealt on the line is reduced by 60%.
Lvl 4: Damage dealt on the line is reduced by 55%.
Lvl 5: Damage dealt on the line is reduced by 50%.

Detailed Information:
Basically, it's like a ranged cleaving attack.
Orb Effects and Buff Placers only trigger at the main target.

Ultimate: Azure [Active][Damage Type: Uknown]
Sarara synchronizes her soul with Azure, fusing their power into a single entity. After this, the power begins to flow within Sarara. Consequently, enemies' energies nearby Sarara will be sapped away, since they cannot handle such power. Finally, Sarara will release a huge long-ranged wide beam upon the target location dealing damage as blinding affected targets.
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Deals damage in a line of 1750 range. Direct HP Removal.
Minimum AoE 200. Maximum AoE 1500.
Cast Range 600.
Blinds affected targets, causing them to have a chance to miss on every attacks. Lasts 5 seconds.
Sarara slows non-allied units within 700 AoE. Aura lasts 5 seconds. Slow lasts 1 second.
Casting Time 2 seconds.
Cannot be interrupted.
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Lvl 1: Deals 1000 damage. Miss chance is 40%. Slows MS by 20%.
Lvl 2: Deals 1750 damage. Miss chance is 60%. Slows MS by 30%.
Lvl 3: Deals 2500 damage. Miss chance is 80%. Slows MS by 40%.

Cooldown: 80/70/60 seconds.

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Detailed Information:
Slow and Blind does not affect allied units.
AoE grows the further it travels. 200~1500.
Ultimate Shape:
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_ = Fake Space xD
7 = AoE
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Credits:
Thx to OmegaSui for helping me to develop this remake of last Sarara, aswell as giving me the original idea about the 3rd skill.

LOL. remember when we were trying to play melty blood xD. God for the lulz.

lol incoming the 4th char of Aria

I thought that this one is a loli paladin but after I see the skill pic, I got despair cause that Ive been looking for a loli paladin pic(speaking of which, Im still waiting for T.P. Sakura update and waiting for more of its pic).


X damage...so still not finish so nothing to say atm about this one...

F your background story mon. PLAY THE VISUAL NOVEL FIRST.

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL MOEDEL!

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Though...too much gundam's funnels. Oh dude wtf is that range? Is this a new Nanoha st...

Finished, feel free to comment.

...Magical Battle Arena, one of the best Ma Hou Shoujo fighting games.
Actually seeing the characters Loli Battle Arena is more appropriate .
Sarara is one of my favorite characters there.

How to charge the skills? Do you right click the target for 3 sec or what?
Interesting Ulti, instead of Super Powerful, can be used for combo.

To charge the skills, Use them. Lol.
E.G. You press Q, targeting the enemy Hero (don't forget it's not single target skill), then it begins to charge, and you can decide between, press Q to release it or wait till 3 seconds (2 with Luna Flare) and it will be casted automatically with full strength.
Note: If casted before charged Damage will be lower.

i dont see any flaw in this suggestion lol i thought id try to help but im not needed so ima.... sit in my corner... alone...

Just wait for Sui to review it, you will see the flaws lol.
PD: He will ruin my request xD.

Ruin ? Like what i did with Jdps ?

By ''ruin'' I mean, you change almost everything in my request, descriptions, skill effect, this way it will work better but you ''ruin my original request''

You mean i've helped you IMPROVE it ?

Stop spamming and review it!!

Sarara releases 12 purons around her, improving all her offensive and defensive abilities.

Passively increases 1 armor per Puron when activated.

Basically means +12 armor? It needs a lower HP for a big +armor or so I think.

Puron Rush [Active][Damage Type: None]
Sarara orders all her Purons to attack at once at the target with the order ''Ikimasu!''
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Cast Range 700.
Single Target Skill.
Requires Puron Tenkai.

damage?

When Nova Impact impacts, instantly Sarara will begin to load her Luna Blaster/Luna Flare.
Luna Blaster/Luna Flare will deal First Skill based current level damage.
E.G. If you have 1st skill lvl 1, After Nova Impact, Sarara will cast Luna Blaster/Luna Flare level 1.
Can be evaded with Shunpo, Flash Move...

regardless of cooldown? Meh I cant see much the flaws.

@Noir

Extra armor will be removed as Puron/Purons are used or spells casted.
12 armor means you cannot use spells, when you use a spell, Bonus Armor is removed.

Damage is listed below, in Detailed Information.

Low cooldown, Low damage.
Damage will be 2250 Nova Impact and 2160 if Luna Flare is fully charged and hits during 2 seconds.

Updated, check first post for more information.

Updated. Remaked all the skills. Improved Descriptions.
Check first post for more information.

• Some grammatical errors in the background story, but meh, no matter.
  
• Freaky stats. Doesn't fit a magical girl, plus the 3rd skill = LOLOLOLOL
  
• Overwhelming attack range if you ask me.
  

Default skill
_Flying System :

• Some grammatical errors or just meaningless.
  
• Note that this is not a buff, thus dispelling is rather out of question.
  
• Flies over impassible terrains, yes. Flies over units, yes. 0 collision, not really.
  
• Too much MS increment. The skill lasts too long imo (20s). 15s would be more than enough.
  
• What will happen if she lands on -impassible terrain-obstacle- ?
  

1st skill
_Energy Sphere :

• Some grammatical errors or just meaningless. Description is too long.
  
• Why would a particle wave expands and contracts, unless it's a black hole. Just asking.
  

2nd skill
_Puron Tenkai :

• The tooltips regarding the defensive barrier should be made like Nanoha's protection.
  
• Why does she have chaos;unknown on every skills?
  
• Why do you need the 12 purons part?
  
• Some grammatical errors or just meaningless.
  

3rd skill
_Azure's Enchanted Soul :

• It's better (and balanced) if this skill gives full range, but lesser damage ( Full damage is too much for a ranged-cleave). Up to 50% of your damage only.
  
• Besides that, nothing. Since the desc is made by me derp...
  

Ultimate
_Azure :

• Some grammatical errors or just meaningless.
  
• What range is that you were referring to (1750) ?
  
• Blind's effect must be stated in the effect tooltips. Blinded units have ??% to miss.
  
• Make it clear that it's triangle shaped with Sarara as its top/tip/wev i dont learn English Maths. Or just a huge dragon breath (ladder : the panda's nuke)
  

-Background Story fixed.
-Stats will be like that.
-She uses a bow, not a stupid staff.

Default Skill
-Fixed.
-Fixed.
-Fixed.
-Fixed.
-Type -Unstuck.

1st Skill
-Fixed.
-Fixed.

2nd Skill
-Changed.
-For fun.
-Well they are 12.
-Fixed.

3rd Skill
-Changed.
-Gtfo.

Ultimate
-Fixed.
-Max reachable range by the skill in straight line.
-Fixed.
-Fixed.