[Saki] Amae Koromo

Hero Name: Amae Koromo
Title: Ryuumonbuchi Captain
Anime: Saki

Spoiler:

Amae Koromo is a second year student at Ryuumonbuchi High School, and the mahjong team's captain. Her skill at the game is so extraordinary that many consider her to be one among the few national-class monsters. Although appearing and acting like a child, her true nature is revealed when she competes, wanting to completely crush the opponents' pride.

Attributes:
Endurance
========== (5)
Swiftness
========== (2)
Potency
========== (7)
Resistance
========== (7)
Speed
========== (3)

Stat Growth
Endurance
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Swiftness
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Potency
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Category
Disabler
Carry

Extra Information
Attack Range: 128 (Melee)
Base Attack Speed: 1.8
Base Move Speed: 270

Abilities

Default Skill - Anticipation
Koromo is able to sense when her opponents are in tenpai, as well as the value of their hands, thus being able to play accordingly.
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Magic Reduction
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Magic damage reduced by 20%
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Spell Type: Passive

1st Skill – Tsumo!
Koromo wins with a tile drawn off the wall, thus winning points from all players
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Area of Effect
Wave damage (3 waves)
If enemy is hero, third wave causes knock back
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Level 1 – 100 damage per wave
Level 2 – 150 damage per wave
Level 3 – 200 damage per wave
Level 4 – 300 damage per wave
Level 5 – 500 damage per wave
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Spell Type: AoE
Spell Damage: Spell
Cast Range: 500
Area of Effect: 300
Interval between waves: 0.5
Knockback distance: 400
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Cooldown: 20

2nd Skill – Haitei Raoyue: Pressure (W)

Spoiler:

Opponents are greatly restricted in their ability to assemble a full hand, as if being dragged to the bottom of the ocean.
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Slows enemies
Enemy accuracy reduced 50%
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Level 1 – Miss/Slow duration 5 seconds
Level 2 – Miss/Slow duration 6 seconds
Level 3 – Miss/Slow duration 8 seconds
Level 4 – Miss/Slow duration 11 seconds
Level 5 – Miss/Slow duration 15 seconds
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Spell Type: AoE, Buff
Cast Range: 500
Area of Effect: 300
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Cooldown: 16/17/18/19/20

3rd Skill – Dealer Seat (E)
Players sitting in the dealer seat can get larger point sums, while paying more when losing a hand.
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Damage output increased
Damage received increased
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Level 1 – Damage output/received 150%/150% ; Duration 11 sec
Level 2 – Damage output/received 155%/145% ; Duration 13 sec
Level 3 – Damage output/received 162%/140% ; Duration 15 sec
Level 4 – Damage output/received 171%/135% ; Duration 17 sec
Level 5 – Damage output/received 183%/130% ; Duration 19 sec
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Spell Type: Self, Buff
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Cooldown: 30

Ultimate – Haitei Raoyue: “Scoop the Moon from the Seabed” (R)

Spoiler:

Koromo wins with a hand drawn from the last tile on the wall, which is a yakuman hand, thus winning a large number of points from enemy players.
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Targeted Area of Effect
If: Haitei Raoyue: Pressure, Then: Armor Reduction is applied
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Level 1 – 1000 damage; armor reduction -5
Level 2 – 2250 damage; armor reduction -8
Level 3 – 3500 damage; armor reduction -12
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Spell Type: AoE, Buff
Spell Damage: Enhanced
Cast Range: 500
Area of Effect: 500
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Cooldown: 120

Some Notes:
Tried to create a reasonable synergy between the abilities, although some may have been a bit much. The primary ability would clearly be the first skill, and the second ability, although usable on its own, is meant to work well with the former. If not clear, the series is not one that involves actual fighting (actually about mahjong), but the amount of effects used makes for an interesting build. Please review and use your flawless logic to rip apart and make this suggestion better.
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When you point it out, it makes the suggestion look incredibly amateur, so I am thankful that you pointed out the various flaws. I have tried to rework the elements that you noted as being unworkable, so I hope that you can look over it again and point out the weak points so that they can be revised. Specific points reworked were:
-Mana pool eliminated
-Default clarified from spell to magic
-Skill 1 growth rate altered (starts lower, and then experiences exponential growth); armor reduction classified as an integer; buff only applies when skill 2 active
-Skill 2 durations increased; accuracy reduction reclassified to miss
-Skill 3 rewritten completely due to overly forced synergy; can sync with Skill 2
-Ultimate rewritten completely due to overly forced synergy
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I thank you for the timely response, and have implemented the suggestions that you have made. There are a number of abilities that could have replaced the first while moving the former first to ultimate, so I decided to go with a farming ability. 1st Skill (the new one) may still need some tuning however.
Changes made:
-Skill 1 rewritten; former skill 1 transferred to ultimate
-Skill 2 duration altered for exponential growth; cooldown reduced
-Skill 3 ratios rewritten as percentages; ratios start higher and experience growth/decay; cooldown/duration adjusted
-Ultimate replaced with former 1st skill; adjusted damage and armor reduction; upgraded to enhanced damage; AoE increased from 300 to 500; cooldown increased to 120 for ultimate

Changes made above

^^ Changes above ^^