[Lost Saga] Ragna

Ragna - Premuim Hero No.7

Ragna brings to the table a multitude of combos at his disposal. He’s
able to effectively keep an opponent in the air by stringing together
his skill combos or using his basic, dash, and air attacks. Ragna’s
coming for glory and he doesn’t feel like leaving without getting it.



Stats

Potency
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Swiftness
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Endurance
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Armor
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Movement Speed
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Attack Range:128 (melee)
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Default Skill 1

Dash (C)

Quickly moved to a point of area. Ragna will be invulnerable
while Dashing. all enemy heroes that passes through Ragna
will damage by 100 damage. Max Ranged 650.

Cooldown: 10 seconds
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Skills

Skill 1

Inferno D (Q)

Slash the Enemy and Stuns for 2 Seconds.
After Stun will Bleed every second the enemy
move it will take 50 damage for second.

Level 1: 200 damage
Level 2: 300 damage
Level 3: 400 damage
Level 4: 500 damage
Level 5: 600 damage

Cooldown:30
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Skill 2

Devour (W)

Strikes an Enemy Damage and Steals Max Hp from Enemy.
Cuts Through armor. Armor will decrease first before the
strike.

Level 1:100 damage. 2% Max Hp and -1 armor
Level 2:200 damage. 3% Max Hp and -1.5 armor
Level 3:300 damage. 5% Max HP and -2 armor
Level 4:400 damage. 6% Max Hp and -3 armor
Level 5:500 damage. 7% Max Hp and -4 armor

Cooldown: 30 seconds
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Skill 3

Hell's Fang (W)

Grabs an Foe/Ally and Launches to air and strike to the Target Location
and damaging around the tossed unit lands. the tossed unit will take 60%
of the damage when its land


Level 1:400 damage 1000 Toss Ranged
Level 2:500 damage 1200 Toss Ranged
Level 3:650 damage 1500 Toss Ranged
Level 4:700 damage 1700 Toss Ranged
Level 5:850 damage 2000 Toss Ranged

Cooldown: 27 seconds
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ULTIMATE

Not Over Yet (R)

Ragna Strikes an Enemy and it will knockback at
ranged 1000. after knockback it will explodes within
700 AoE. Damaging the knockback unit and enemy within
the Explosion Range

Level 1: 1500 Explosion damage
Level 2: 3000 Explosion damage
Level 3: 4500 Explosion damage

Cooldown: 110 seconds
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Follow this as example of a char suggestion:
https://abcwc3.forumotion.com/t799-elsword-aisha

-Background Story without spaces, said it god knows how many times.
-Also it would be nice if you place somewhere ''Background Story''

-My eyes hurt, why no colour?
-Where is the scythe weapon picture?

and allies that attack the bleeding enemy will gained
2% of their max HP

-2% Max HP per hit?
-What about using/spamming skills?

steals 2% of their Max Potency for 10 seconds.

-Awesome, so if they have 30 Potency, you steal 0,6?
-Skill duration?
-I remember someone called Fagstar, whom ultimate made him invulnerable and... he began an endless trip around the world in the previous version~

Nevermind I don't feel like continuing this.

Conclusion:
-Lack of work and originality.
-Skills with too low/high DMG, plain and boring, aswell CD is too high.
-Like always, mass spaces, tired of saying to remove them.
-Lack of information about skills (tooltips and detailed information)
-The little provided information is a mess due to the extra spaces, fix it.
-Not balanced, requires more work and a bit of time looking at https://abcwc3.forumotion.com/f26-approved-suggestions
-You even missed 1 stat (Movement Speed)
-Honestly, click the link I gave you above, and follow my suggestion as example.

alright i will do what u said but. the Hero Doesn't have voice and i cant find the Scythe Model
Sorry.....

Im sure u realize this character is from blazblue right, and that not over yet is a 22c pick up move hardly fit to be an ultimate.