[Fairy Tail] Natsu Dragneel

Natsu Dragneel
The Fire Dragon Slayer
Anime: Fairy Tail


Background Story:
Natsuwas found when he was a baby by Igneel, a powerful Fire Dragon whom Natsu called his "Father". Igneel raised him and taught him how to talk, write, and use a form of Lost Magic known as Fire Dragon Slayer Magic. 7 years before Natsu met Lucy on July 7, X777, Igneel mysteriously disappeared. Since then, Natsu has been searching for him constantly. After Igneel's abandonment, Natsu joined the Fairy Tail Guild.

Stats
Endurance
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Swiftness
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Potency
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Defense
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Move Speed
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Attack Range: 122 (Melee)

Stats Growth

Endurance
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Swiftness
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Potency
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Extra Information:
Movement Speed: 280 MS
Attack Animation: Melee Form -> 0,3 / 0,3
Casting Animation: Melee Form -> 0,3 / 0,3
Base Attack Time: Melee Form -> 1,5

Default Skill: Fire Dragon's Iron Fist [Active][Target: non-Allied Hero][Damage Type: Magic]
Natsu engulfs his fist in large flames and punches his opponent which makes his opponent pushed.
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Pushing the enemy by 400 range.
Damage: 3x Base Damage and 1 sec Stun.
Mana Cost: 50

Cooldown : 20 Seconds

1st Skill: Fire Dragon's Roar [Active][Target: AoE][Damage Type: Magic]
Natsu first inhales, gathering fire in his/her mouth, and then releases such fire in the opponents' direction, creating a large, exploding fireball which damages and burns his/her foes
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Releases Fire Ball from his mouth on a single line and hits every non-Allied units including Heroes
Lasts 6 seconds.
Mana Cost: 100.
Casting : 2 Seconds
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Lvl 1: Deals 100 Damage/sec, 500 range.
Lvl 2: Deals 150 Damage/sec, 550 range.
Lvl 3: Deals 200 Damage/sec, 600 range.
Lvl 4: Deals 250 Damage/sec, 700 range.
Lvl 5: Deals 300 Damage/sec, 800 range.

Cooldown: 25 seconds.

Detailed Information:
If the character moved during the casting/during this skill, it will be stopped.
during the casting, this skill can be stopped by stunning or silence.
if the skill is stopped during the casting (not during the skill has started) it'll deal 300 damage to Natsu himself.
causing Burning stats to creeps/heroes lasts 6 seconds.

2nd Skill: Crimson Lotus : Exploding Flame Blade [Active][Target: Non-Allied Hero][Damage Type: Magic]
Natsu ignites his arms and generates long torrents of flames from them, which move to hit the enemy in a spiralling formation.
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Natsu Throw his enemy into the air and his enemy will be stunned when he's slammed onto the ground.
Casting : 2 Seconds
Damage Duration : 5 Seconds
Throwing Range : 200.
Mana Cost: 200.
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Lvl 1: Deals 200 Damage, 2 sec Stun
Lvl 2: Deals 400 Damage, 2 sec Stun.
Lvl 3: Deals 600 Damage, 3 sec Stun
Lvl 4: Deals 800 Damage, 3 sec Stun.
Lvl 5: Deals 900 Damage, 4 sec Stun.

Detailed Information:
When Natsu have 20% of HP, this skill will have 30% chance to get 100 bonus damage.

Cooldown: 30 seconds.

3rd Skill: Fire Dragon's Brilliant Flame [Active][Target: AoE][Damage Type: Magic]
Natsu generates fire on both of his hands and then joins them, creating a unique, larger flame as a result. When such flame collides with the enemy, it creates a very massive and destructive explosion.
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Casting : 3 Seconds
AoE : 1000
Mana Cost : 250
Stun : 2 Seconds
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Lvl 1: Dealing 600 Damage.
Lvl 2: Dealing 700 Damage.
Lvl 3: Dealing 800 Damage.
Lvl 4: Dealing 900 Damage.
Lvl 5: Dealing 1000 Damage.

Detailed Information:
When the casting, Natsu is invulnerable.
Causing burn stats to all Non-Allied Units who hitted by the flame lasts 6 seconds.

Cooldown: 20/30/35/40/45 Seconds.

Ultimate: Crimson Lotus : Phoenix Blade [Active][Target: Non-Allied Hero][Damage Type: Magic]
Natsu Covers himself with his fire and then propels himself against the opponent at incredible speed, leaving behind a long wake of flames and hitting the target with a devastating headbutt
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Damage Duration: 6 sec
Slow Stats lasts 10 seconds.
Mana Cost: 300.
Casting Range : 500 Range.
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Lvl 1: Deals 800 Damage, 400 Damage explosion.
Lvl 2: Deals 1000 Damage, 500 Damage explosion.
Lvl 3: Deals 1500 Damage, 600 Damage explosion.

Cooldown: 60/80/90 seconds.

Detailed Information:
Pushing the enemy for 200 Range.
when the skill finished, it'll cause an explosion for 400 AoE around them.
the target won't be effected by the explosion but the surrounding non-allied units will be effected.

Final Note:
Special Thx to Aria.Owns for teaching me about the attack types
sorry if there's any mistake cause i'm not good at suggesting :P
and Feel free to comment~!

Since today is your birthday... my present for you is a complete review about this fail male, I hope you don't hate me.
There we go.

Pushing the enemy by 400 range.

-Pushed in which direction?
-MS while being pushed?
-Time to reach the location when being pushed?
-Can you use instant skills (e.g. Shunpoo) while being pushed?
-Are you stunned while being pushed?
-What if you make collision with an allied/enemy/ unit?
-Can you be pushed through unwalkable terrain?

Damage: 3x Base Damage and 1 sec Stun.

-Base Damage or Potency Stat?
-If Base Damage, then it's just a simple 3x critical?
-If Potency Stat, obviously the damage is between ridiculous and mediocre.
-Stun is so overused, and if the enemy is being pushed and he cannot move, why stun?

Mana Cost: 50

-Does this fail male use mana?
-If so, add how many MP.
-If not, Mana cost is pointless.

1st Skill:
Lasts 6 seconds.

-Is this a channeling skill or those 6 secs are the duration of the burning effect?
-Casting Range?

Mana Cost: 100.

-Why does this use MP?

Casting : 2 Seconds

-Why do you need 2 seconds to cast a skill that requires 6 secs already to do ''something''? Pointless.

Lvl 5: Deals 300 Damage/sec, 800 range.

-Again the same shit, channeling (The hero cannot move while using it for 6 secs or until he cancels it) or places a debuff on the enemies which lasts 6 seconds?
-If it's a debuff dealing DPS, it does not deal initial dmg?

Cooldown: 25 seconds.

-Too much cooldown for such an useless skill, this is supposed to be a farming skill, so less CD.

If the character moved during the casting/during this skill, it will be stopped.

-You cannot move while casting, unless you press Hold Position.

during the casting, this skill can be stopped by stunning or silence.

-Like every casting/channeling skill.

if the skill is stopped during the casting (not during the skill has started) it'll deal 300 damage to Natsu himself.

-Why do you want to deal 300 dmg to yourself if you decide to cancel it? stupid.

causing Burning stats to creeps/heroes lasts 6 seconds.

-This belongs to tooltips, not to detailed info.

2nd Skill:
Natsu Throw his enemy into the air and his enemy will be stunned when he's slammed onto the ground.

-Casting Range?
-Animation Duration? (Time to throw the enemy, etc)
-Can you move while doing it? Would be weird, while you throw your enemy you spam skills, rofl.

Casting : 2 Seconds

-This means that you cannot move?
-Can you cancel it by Holding Position before you finish the skill, to bug your target into the air? *evil laugh*
-What if you get stunned/silenced while performing it? I smell moar bugs.

Damage Duration : 5 Seconds

-huh?

Throwing Range : 200.

-Can you choose where to throw your victim?
-In which direction does it throw your enemy?

Mana Cost: 200.

-No MP Sherlock.

Lvl 1: Deals 200 Damage, 2 sec Stun
Lvl 2: Deals 400 Damage, 2 sec Stun.
Lvl 3: Deals 600 Damage, 3 sec Stun
Lvl 4: Deals 800 Damage, 3 sec Stun.
Lvl 5: Deals 900 Damage, 4 sec Stun.

-A proper dmg and stun scalement is required, we don't need more useless or imba heroes.

When Natsu have 20% of HP, this skill will have 30% chance to get 100 bonus damage.

-Smart move, kill yourself with 1st skill, then when your HP is low you deal 100 bonus dmg, a nice deal.
-Now seriously, 100 dmg is ridiculous, and the chance, too.

3rd Skill:
Casting : 3 Seconds

-Why casting time for a plain AoE nuke?

Mana Cost : 250

-We need a Diffusal Blade to burn mana or so.

Stun : 2 Seconds

-Who is stunned by this, enemies or yourself? (After what I saw, I had to ask this, sorry)
-And I don't understand how a ''huge explosion'' stuns for 2 seconds.

Lvl 1: Dealing 600 Damage.
Lvl 2: Dealing 700 Damage.
Lvl 3: Dealing 800 Damage.
Lvl 4: Dealing 900 Damage.
Lvl 5: Dealing 1000 Damage.

-Look what you did here, 600 dmg when actual HP is low (early game & boots buyers, ya so pro ikr), and 1000 dmg when the HP is huge (late game, aka farm like shit to be imba 20k HP np.)
-Re-scale and balance it properly.

Causing burn stats to all Non-Allied Units who hitted by the flame lasts 6 seconds.

-And the burn effect is where?
-Does it do something or simply a burning effect for cool looking?

Ultimate:
Natsu Covers himself...

-Why did you colored ''Natsu'' with yellow everywhere, but not on the ultimate?

Damage Duration: 6 sec

-Dmg duration on what, where, how, who, when and the most important thing... WHY?

Slow Stats lasts 10 seconds.

-Tell me what is slowed once more, since I didn't get it.

Mana Cost: 300.

-I have to suggest a new item, available in Elsword, called ''MP Glasses''. These glasses allow you to see enemies MP, since every skill about this char use MP, and ABC Heroes don't have MP (Most of them), we will need these glasses to see the MP bar I presume.

Lvl 1: Deals 800 Damage, 400 Damage explosion.
Lvl 2: Deals 1000 Damage, 500 Damage explosion.
Lvl 3: Deals 1500 Damage, 600 Damage explosion.

-More details.
-Better dmg scalement.
-How many explosions?
-Explosions duration?
-Explosions AoE?
-How many explosions per second?
-How many times do the explosions hit?
-Are the explosions random placed?

Cooldown: 60/80/90 seconds.

-Why does the cooldown increase?
-And why isn't the CD scaled?

Pushing the enemy for 200 Range.

-Pushed in which direction?
...
-Read the

Pushing the enemy by 400 range.

part above.

when the skill finished, it'll cause an explosion for 400 AoE around them.

-This belongs to tooltips, not to detailed information.

the target won't be effected by the explosion but the surrounding non-allied units will be effected.

-Why isn't the target dmged by this explosion? Is he God or something? Me wants too.

Special Thx to Aria.Owns for teaching me about the attack types

-I taught you too about not to use plain overused useless nuking skills, why did you? WHY?

sorry if there's any mistake cause i'm not good at suggesting :P

-Not any mistake, just a few of them, a few of hundred I would say.

and Feel free to comment~!

-Done ^

To my eyes:
-No idea how to suggest a char, even though I told you to check other suggestions.
-I said aswell not to use plain nukes, etc. Well you know.
-No idea how much time you spent to do this, I will not try to guess it, I will just say, that more time is required.
-If I were you, I would delete this and start over again, this time looking at other suggestions.

So, Happy Birthday Furion, this is my present for ya, I hope you enjoyed it.
Your lovely Aria.
<3

as furion12 asked to me personally, thread moved to Declined.

OmegaSui wrote:I take this as an indirect insult to myself due to the fact that I am the moderator of this section, yet he did not ask me to do the dirty job.

You do the dirty job of killing everyone with your **** posts everyday (I do it too, lying is pointless), isn't that enough for you?!
Do you want moar?! Thought so, we always want moar.

due of no more need to discuss, thread locked.