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Post by ChoLoness 5/17/2011, 11:24 am

[K-ON!] Tsumugi Kotobuki Mugi
HERO NAME: Kotobuki Tsumugi
ANIME: K-ON!

Tsumugi, often referred to as 'Mugi' by her friends, is a wealthy girl with a
gentle and sweet personality who plays a keyboard. She originally intended to
join the choir club, but joins the Light Music Club instead after receiving
an invitation and encouragement from both Mio and Ritsu. She is the daughter
of a company president, and her family has several villas in various places
around Japan. Since her father also owns a maid café, she often brings
confectionery and an assortment of sweets and pastries to the club room, and
she diligently makes tea with a tea set which is kept in their club room.
Tsumugi displays a rebellious streak occasionally, diverting from her
normally well-behaved and mature demeanor to the surprise of the others.

Status:

Max Health
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Attack Speed
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Base Damage
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Defense
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Move Speed
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Attack Range: Melee


Default Skill:

Keyboard Swing(Passive)
Mugi possesses unusually high strength being able to being able
to effortlessly carry around her keyboard.
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15% Chance to do cleave damage for the next attack
Mugi will receive a buff of 30% Cleave for 1.5 seconds.
If she doesn't attack for the duration of the buff,
then the next attack will not have Cleave effect.
The Cleave will do 30% of total damage on 200 AoE.
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Skills:

Korg Triton Extreme
As Mugi plays her Keyboard, the tune gives a soothing effect for her allies
and irritates her enemies.

The enemies surrounding Mugi take damage, a chance to decrease attack
rate, and a chance to forces nearby enemy units to attack the user. Mugi's surrounding allies including her then get healed.
Berserk Call lasts for 10 seconds.
Decrease in Attack Damage lasts for 15 seconds.
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Level 1: Damage 125; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 3%; + 3% Max HP; 20% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 2: Damage 200; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 6%; + 6% MaxHP; 25% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 3: Damage 275; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 9%; + 9% Max HP; 30% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 4: Damage 350; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 12%; + 12% Max HP; 35% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 5: Damage 425; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 15%; + 15% Max HP; 35% Chance to cast Berserk Call
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Casting Time: 0.5/1/1.5/2/2
Range: Around Mugi
AoE: 350
Cool Down: 35 seconds

Strawberry
Mugi calls multiple strawberries to her side to aid her against her opponents.

The strawberries will deal damage per second to enemies who are
moving/attacking/using skill within Mugi's range. Enemies not moving will not
take damage. Strawberries lasts for 30 seconds.
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Level 1: Deals 50 damage per second to nearby moving enemies
Level 2: Deals 70 damage per second to nearby moving enemies
Level 3: Deals 90 damage per second to nearby moving enemies
Level 4: Deals 110 damage per second to nearby moving enemies
Level 5: Deals 130 damage per second to nearby moving enemies
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AoE: 300
CD: 45 seconds

Houkago Tea Time!(Passive)
Mugi is a member of the Light Music Club and a band named Houkago Tea Time.

Each time Mugi uses a skill, she gives a small boost to allies around her.
The boost lasts for 8 seconds
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Level 1: 5% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 3%
3% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 10%

Level 2: 10% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 6%
6% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 20%

Level 3: 15% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 9%
9% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 30%

Level 4: 20% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 12%
12% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 40%

Level 5: 25% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 15%
15% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 50%
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Boost Duration: 8 Seconds
AoE: 500

Ultimate:

Glissando
As Mugi plays her keyboard, the tune creates a musical note to defeat
her enemies grouped together.

The musical note made by Mugi's Glissando is fired to an enemy, dealing
damage to the target and to those around it with a decrease in movement speed.
The Musical note can then be 'Bounced' to other enemies surrounding the target.
If there are no other enemies around the target for more than 0.5seconds then
that will be the last hit.
Each 'Bounce' makes each corresponding damage 15% weaker
Requires at least one opponent in 300 AoE of first target to 'Bounce'
'Bounced' Opponent will get 250 knockback
The opponent nearest to 'Bounced' char will get the next 'Bounce' as long as he/she is within 300AoE
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Level 1: 3 'Bounces'
Deals 650 damage to first target and 163 damage to 200 AoE of 'Bounced Char'.
Decreases movement speed by 20%

Level 2: 4 'Bounces'
Deals 800 damage to first target and 200 damage to 200 AoE of 'Bounced Char'.
Decreases movement speed by 35%

Level 3: 5 'Bounces'
Deals 950 damage to first target and 238 damage to 200 AoE of 'Bounced Char'.
Decreases movement speed by 50%
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Cast Type: Target
Casting Range: 500
CD: 75 seconds
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Notes:
- All information used came from Wikipedia
- I am still thinking of a better description for her. I think "Keyboardist of HTT" is a bit off.
Any suggestions?

Changelog:
Spoiler:


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Post by selphiroth 5/17/2011, 10:24 pm

Here we come K-On lol about to suggest too but too busy so can't do it :D
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Post by OmegaSui 5/18/2011, 11:55 am

Can't count how many time i've tried to post this but failed to due to lack of time/ DotA/ ORPG/ ABC.

Here goes.

Default skill : How much % damage does the cleave deal? In ? AoE?

1st skill : 425 dmg at lvl 5 ? Is it 425 DPS or 425 total dmg that skill deals?
Decrease what attack dmg? Physic (raw or with bonus included)?Magic?
+% max HP to max HP or heal %max HP ? If first option, how long does it last?

2nd skill : Nothing much to say, except why attack/skill using also counted to take dmg.
moving/attacking/using skill within Mugi's range
As in the 300 AoE right?

3rd skill : too low on AS boost.It's like you forgot a zero.

Ultimate : LOL LOW DMG. AoE for the 'surrounding enemies' = ? Also, does the initial target counted in the 'surrounding enemies' ?
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Post by ChoLoness 5/18/2011, 1:04 pm

Default Skill:
30% Chance to do a cleave damage for the next attack
Cleave damage = 30% of normal physical attack
Kinda like Soul Eater? Except that not all attacks are splashed

1st Skill:
- At level 5, it does 425 total damage, no DPS, just a regular skill. Kinda like Dissonance with a heal, a debuff and a casting time
- There is 50% chance to decrease Atk Dmg by 15% -- i am referring to normal physical attack only. The bonuses associated with normal physical attacks are included in the decrease.
- This debuff lasts for 15 seconds to whoever gets hit by the skill.
- The heal associated with the 1st skill is an increase in max HP
For example, if it's at level 5, and you have 100 Max HP, then that would be +15 to your life.

2nd Skill:
Well if for example you use a long range char and put it in HOLD POSITION then it can simply attack targets without moving from the spot. So yeah, you will get hit even if your on HOLD POSITION as long as you are moving.

3rd Skill:
I haven't really thought about the boosts so maybe you can suggest the proper variables for this skill? I might make an unbalanced AS boost.

Ultimate:
As I see it, this skill is similar to DoTA's Lich Ultimate. The only difference is that this is a Musical Note, not like a hadouken. About the LOW DMG, im thinking of better variables but maybe you can make a suggestion for this too.

I'll make an edit of the first post regarding these after I get a new reply.


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Post by OmegaSui 5/18/2011, 2:23 pm

AoE cleave = ?
So if you have 10k HP you will have a bonus of 1k5 HP to your max HP pool forever? Inf duration?

== You seems to love the idea of everlasting buff. Add a duration to it first.

Well, look at all available heroes in ABC till now, decide the total damage outcome from skills, decide their roles, and change yours to matching such role.
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Post by ChoLoness 5/18/2011, 2:55 pm

Wait wait wait. I think I got that one explanation SO wrong.

The heal effect associated with the 1st skill is similar to Miku's heal. Except that it's a whole lot weaker and it's AoE.

If it's Skill Level 5 (+15% of MaxHP) and if you have like 50/100 HP
Then you will be healed by 15 points = 65/100 HP
NOT 50/115 HP. I apologize for the misunderstanding

About the cleave for the default skill, ill change it:
15% Chance to do cleave damage for the next attack
Mugi will receive a buff of 30% Cleave for 1.5 seconds.
If she doesn't attack for the duration of the buff,
then the next attack will not have Cleave effect.
The Cleave will do 30% of total damage on 200 AoE.

I will be editing the third skill to have a duration for the buff.

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Level 1: 10% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 15%
5% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 8%

Level 2: 15% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 15%
8% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 8%

Level 3: 20% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 15%
10% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 8%

Level 4: 25% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 15%
12% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 8%

Level 5: 25% Chance to increase Movement Speed by 15%
15% Chance to increase Attack Speed by 8%
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The duration of the Attack Speed and Movement Speed boost depends on Skill Level:

3/6/9/12/15


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Post by OmegaSui 5/18/2011, 8:13 pm

Duration : constant 8 secs.
MS increase improves via lvling : 3/6/9/12/15%. Chance : 5/10/15/20/25%.
AS increase : 10/20/30/40/50%. Chance : 3/6/9/12/15%.

To make the 2nd skill better, make skill 1's chance effect : 50% chance to make enemies move randomly
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Post by ChoLoness 5/19/2011, 9:01 am

Edited according to your suggestion.

I am still thinking of ways to improve the Ulti because of the Low Damage.

How about this:

The musical note made by Mugi's Glissando is fired to an enemy, dealing
damage to the target and to those around it with a decrease in movement speed.
The Musical note can then be 'passed' to other enemies surrounding the target.
If there are no other enemies around the target for more than 0.5seconds then
that will be the last hit.
Each 'Pass' makes each corresponding damage 40% weaker
Requires at least one opponent in 300 AoE of first target to 'Pass'
The opponent nearest to 'Passed' char will get the next 'Pass' as long as he/she is within 300AoE
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Level 1: 3 'Passes'
Deals 650 damage to first target and 163 damage to 200 AoE of 'Passed Char'.
Decreases movement speed by 20%

Level 2: 4 'Passes'
Deals 800 damage to first target and 200 damage to 200 AoE of 'Passed Char'.
Decreases movement speed by 35%

Level 3: 5 'Passes'
Deals 950 damage to first target and 238 damage to 200 AoE of 'Passed Char'.
Decreases movement speed by 50%
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Cast Type: Target
Casting Range: 500
CD: 75 seconds
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Example: Glissando at Level 1
There are 3 Opponents within Ultimate's range
Target A:
- Receives 650 Damage (Full damage)
- 163 Damage dealt to 200 AoE of Target A
- Decreases movement speed of Target A by 20%

Target B:
- Within 300AoE of Target A
- Receives 260 Damage (40% of damage dealt to Target A)
- 65 Damage dealt to 200 AoE of Target B
- Decreases movement speed of Target B by 20%

Target C:
- Within 300AoE of Target B
- Receives 104 Damage (40% of damage dealt to Target B)
- 26 Damage dealt to 200 AoE of Target C
- Decreases movement speed of Target C by 20%

Alternative Scenario:
Target A: First Hit
Target B: Second Hit
Target A: Third Hit

Note:
- When Target B gets the Second Hit, Target A happens to be the nearest within range. Therefore, the next 'Pass' goes to Target A.

- In this case, the decrease in Target A's movement speed is still 20%.
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Post by OmegaSui 5/19/2011, 12:44 pm

Use "bounce".
Remove the 'reduce dmg dealt upon each bounce' and revamp the dmg or reduce it to 15% dmg reduction.

To make the 2nd skill better, make skill 1's chance effect : 50% chance to make enemies move randomly
If you dont want this,try add Knockback effect to ultimate(bounce on an enemy will knock it backwards to the opposite direction it's facing), forcing them to move since we don't have force staff nor the FORCE!
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Post by ChoLoness 5/20/2011, 8:48 pm

I figured the damage of ultimate would be totally useless in the late game so i made it stronger.

'reduce it to 15% dmg reduction.'
Are you talking about removing the decrease in movement speed associated with the ulti? If so, do you want me to change the 'decrease in MS' to a '15% dmg reduction?'
Then this would be the new effect of Ulti
Spoiler:

Or are you talking about making the dmg reduction of 1st skill to 15% each level?
If so, then this would be the new effect:

Spoiler:

About the 1st skill, i have already added the 'move randomly' effect
but after your suggestion I think knockback would be better.
I can't think of how the enemy players would 'move randomly' if they get affected by the skill.
I am thinking of making the knockback similar to BRS' ulti but i don't know how its measured.
Perhaps making a simple 'draws target and bounced player back' will suffice?

For now, i will be making changes on the word 'Pass' to 'Bounce'
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Post by OmegaSui 5/20/2011, 9:32 pm

Each 'Bounce' makes each corresponding damage 40% weaker.
I meant this. Change it to : Each bounce reduces next damage dealt by 15%.

The move randomly part was to replace the damage reduction...And it's possible to do that, just random force move on random locations while taking player's control. Well if you'd prefer knockback,no one would mind since it's your choice.

About 250+ (idk) knockback i think.

It's kinda hard to synch with a skill that only deals dmg every 1 second. Oh since there's a part where attacking also fits the condition required to take dmg, some kind of berserk call would be good.
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Post by ChoLoness 5/22/2011, 9:47 am

Changed to 'Bounce' and changed to 'Each Bounce makes each corresponding damage 15% weaker'
Added 'Bounced' Opponent gets a 250 knockback
I will also be removing the 'Move Randomly' Effect associated with first skill

Spoiler:

It's kinda hard to synch with a skill that only deals dmg every 1 second. Oh since there's a part where attacking also fits the condition required to take dmg, some kind of berserk call would be good.
Im sorry i have no idea what berserk call is. Is that some skill made to forcefully make the opponents attack?
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Post by Aria.OwNs 7/17/2011, 10:19 pm

Im sorry i have no idea what berserk call is. Is that some skill made to forcefully make the opponents attack?

Yes it is, a skill that forces nearby enemy units to attack the user who used Berserk Call.
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Post by ChoLoness 7/17/2011, 10:36 pm

I see, so it's connected with this reply from Omegasui
To make the 2nd skill better, make skill 1's chance effect : 50% chance to make enemies move randomly

That skill would be excellent against monsters in case of farming but how would it work against players? Well the condition of the 2nd skill is that the enemy MUST BE moving or at least casting a skill if he/she is standing still.

I will be arranging the first skill to make it have that effect in quote tomorrow.
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Post by OmegaSui 7/17/2011, 11:11 pm

You know that some skills require casting delay b4 it's used right? With that special effect + 2nd skill, the combo would be lethal( Forcing them to move will trigger the 2nd skill's damaging condition, and at the same time, semi-silence them). Add a duration first, obviously.

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Post by ChoLoness 7/18/2011, 5:12 pm

You know that some skills require casting delay b4 it's used right?
What exactly are you referring to here?
The casting time of the skill?
The time it takes for the animation to cast?
The interval between casting and the effect?
Sorry i have no idea XP


The enemies surrounding Mugi take damage, a chance to decrease attack rate and a chance to forces nearby enemy units to attack the user. Mugi's surrounding allies including her then get healed.

Berserk Call effect lasts for 10 seconds.
Decrease in Attack Damage lasts for 15 seconds.
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Level 1: Damage 125; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 3%; + 3% Max HP; 20% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 2: Damage 200; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 6%; + 6% MaxHP; 25% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 3: Damage 275; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 9%; + 9% Max HP; 30% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 4: Damage 350; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 12%; + 12% Max HP; 35% Chance to cast Berserk Call
Level 5: Damage 425; 50% Chance to Decrease Atk Dmg by 15%; + 15% Max HP; 35% Chance to cast Berserk Call
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Casting Time: 0.5/1/1.5/2/2
Range: Around Mugi
AoE: 350
Cool Down: 35 seconds

I have added the Berserk Call effect to the first skill as per Omegasui's suggestion.
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