[Soul Eater] Asura

Asura
Kishin, Great Old One

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Background Story:
Asura was a human said to have always possessed an extremely careful soul. This resulted in making him mistrustful of everyone around him, which is the primary reason why he covered his body with a ridiculous amount of clothing. However, despite all his immense power, he was persistently terrified with the greatest fear that was possible. So in order to protect himself, he became obsessed with power and, forgetting all discipline, began eating the souls of innocents who were not listed by Shinigami. This fear eventually drove him to devour even his own weapon partner, causing him to be consumed by madness and become the first Kishin.

Base Stats:

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Attack Speed
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Base Damage
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Defense
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Movement Speed
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Attack Range: 150 (melee)

Stats Growth

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Base Damage: ==

Extra Information

Movement Speed: 250
Attack Animation: 0.3 - 0.3 s
Casting Animation: 0.5 - 0.5 s
Base Attack Animation: 1.5 s
Missile Speed: None

SKILLS:
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1ST DEFAULT SKILL SKIN SCARVES (Active) (Damage Type: None)

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These scarves are made from Asura's own skin, giving him complete control over them. This allows him to use them as extra limbs or to shield himself from attacks.
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TOOLTIPS:
-Grants 1.5 Armor.
-20 HP regen per seconds.
-Last 20 secs.
-CD 40 secs.
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2ND DEFAULT SKILL DEVOURED SOULS (Passive) (Damage Type:None)

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Everytime Asura kills his/her victims, he also take their souls by swallowing them and making him stronger. He can also use this as a part of his strength.
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TOOLTIPS:

-for every creeps he killed, Asura gains 1 soul (MP).
-for every enemy heroes he killed, Asura gains 20 souls (MP).
-2 souls is equal to +1 Damage.
-For each 1 soul Asura gets +10hp bonus.
-Only a maximum of 100 souls.
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Datailed Information

- If Asura has been killed all souls are reset and all the stats growth gain by this effect is remove too.
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1ST SKILL
RELEASE VAJRA (Q)(Active) (Damage Type: Physical)

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Though Asura ate his Weapon partner, he can regurgitate it partially so that the pointed end extends from his mouth he can still use the weapon in this state. He can rush the enemy while using his soul wavelength to create a twister-like air current around him, turning himself into a human drill. This attack was strong enough to break through Shinigami's shield and blow a hole through his body. Asura can also fire a powerful beam of energy from the tip of his weapon.
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TOOLTIPS:

-A new (Q)skill will appear called Vajra Beam.
-He becomes a range type with an attack range of 600 that fires an orb.
-Buff placer stacks.
-Require souls to use.

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LVL 1:Gives 30 Damage and a 15% chance to rush towards to his facing enemy target with zero collision and pierced to it like a drill with 100 deal damage and a knockback effect in a range of 500.Last 15 secs(Requires 5 souls as a cost)
LVL 2:Gives 60 Damage and a 20% chance to rush towards to his facing enemy target with zero collision and pierced to it like a drill with 200 deal damage and a knockback effect in a range of 500.Last 20 secs(Requires 10 souls as a cost)
LVL 3:Gives 90 Damage and a 25% chance to rush towards to his facing enemy target with zero collision and pierced to it like a drill with 300 deal damage and a knockback effect in a range of 500.Last 25 secs(Requires 15 souls as a cost)
LVL 4:Gives 120 Damage and a 30% chance to rush towards to his facing enemy target with zero collision and pierced to it like a drill with 400 deal damage and a knockback effect in a range of 500.Last 30 secs(Requires 20 souls as a cost)
LVL 5:Gives 150 Damage and a 35% chance to rush towards to his facing enemy target with zero collision and pierced to it like a drill with 500 deal damage and a knockback effect in a range of 500.Last 35 secs(Requires 25 souls as a cost)

Cooldown 50 secs.

Datailed Information

-A new (Q)skill will appear called Vajra Beam.
-While in (R)skill Asura will become a drill is not applied
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New(Q)skill VAJRA BEAM(Damge type:Spell)
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Asura can also fire a powerful beam of energy from the tip of his weapon.
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TOOLTIPS:

-Casting range 800
-Target Area
-Deal Damage 10x the souls with 1000 range and Aoe 150.
-Cooldown 30 secs.

CD 30 secs.
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2ND SKILL
ASURA SHIELD (W)(Active) (Damage Type: None)

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Asura creates his own shield similar to Shinigami's, in the form of a red circle at his front. It is filled with numerous symbols, most likely of Hindu or Buddhist origin. This shield can blocks any kinds of attack just at front of him.
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TOOLTIPS:

- creates a shield front of Asura that have 300 Aoe.
- lasts 15 sec.
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LV1 1: blocks 300 of Damage (Spell/Physical)
LV1 2: blocks 600 of Damage (Spell/Physical)
LV1 3: blocks 900 of Damage (Spell/Physical)
LV1 4: blocks 1200 of Damage (Spell/Physical)
LV1 5: blocks 1500 of Damage (Spell/Physical)

CD 50/45/40/35/30
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Datailed Information

- If Asura has been hit at his back, Asura Shield has not been applied.
3RD SKILL
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COMPRESSED SOUL WAVELENGTH BEAMS (E)(Active) (Damage Type: Spell)

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This attack begins with Asura folding his hands in a manner similar to praying, before creating small spheres of soul energy which become two circular eye-like symbols that both release a very powerful beam of energy.
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TOOLTIPS:
-Summon two circular eye-like symbols behind Asura with wavelenght beams and has an Aoe of 200 per each beams a total of 400.
-Range of 1500.
-Channeling.
-Target Area.
-lasts 5 sec.
-Require souls to use.
-Slow Duration 2.5 sec.
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LVL 1: takes 100 DPS to enemy units then 40% slow in MS (Requires 15 souls as a cost)
LVL 2: takes 150 DPS to enemy units then 45% slow in MS (Requires 20 souls as a cost)
LVL 3: takes 200 DPS to enemy units then 50% slow in MS (Requires 25 souls as a cost)
LVL 4: takes 250 DPS to enemy units then 55% slow in MS (Requires 30 souls as a cost)
LVL 5: takes 300 DPS to enemy units then 60% slow in MS (Requires 35 souls as a cost)
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Datailed Information

- summons two circular eye-like symbols behind Asura and it can release wavelength beams with 200 AoE each.

Cooldown: 30 secs.
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ULTI SKILL
THE KISHIN'S MONSTROUS FORM (R)(Active) (Damage Type: None)

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Asura undergoes a transformation into a much larger, monstrous version of himself. Maka, Kid, Black Star and their weapons confront him, but all their attacks prove useless. Asura is almost completely destroyed, except for a burned husk, which explodes into Asura's original form.
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TOOLTIPS:

-Transform into a monstrous form.
-Vajra Beam increases damage by 25% and plus 150 Aoe.
-Gives 20% cleaving damage (300 Aoe)
-Buff placer stacks.
-Require souls to use.
-Last 40 secs.
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LVL 1:10% Decrease Physical Damage around Asura with an Aoe of 1000 and if Asura has been killed while in his monstrous form he has a 40% chance that he will be back formerly again with full hp and regain a 20% of souls he absorb.(Requires 60 souls as a cost)
LVL 2:15% Decrease Physical Damage around Asura with an Aoe of 1000 and if Asura has been killed while in his monstrous form he has a 60% chance that he will be back formerly again with full hp and regain a 30% of souls he absorb.(Requires 80 souls as a cost)
LVL 3:20% Decrease Physical Damage around Asura with an Aoe of 1000 and if Asura has been killed while in his monstrous form he has a 80% chance that he will be back formerly again with full hp and regain a 50% of souls he absorb.(Requires 100 souls as a cost)

CD 120/90/60.
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Datailed Information

-If Asura has been killed while in this form then revive this way the soul he collect is not remove from him.
-Asura cannot use (W) and (E)skills while in this form.
-If this effect ends and Asura is not killed the same effect is applied.

- 1 soul is equal to +1 Base Damage, +10 Max Health Bonus
- Only a maximum of 150 souls only.

Right. So you get 1.5k dmg and 150,000 hp with only 150 souls. Yup.

Have... You played ABC before?

Jimsonji..
I think you mean:

1 soul = +1 damage + 10 hp

so...

150 soul = +150 damage + 1500 hp

+base damage & +max health is different with +damage & +hp

I created the spells to test, and my opinion is...
2 default passive skills? a little over-power.
Asura Shield is a little too good...
cooldown don't need to get littler...
the other powers are good to me.
i give a 7/10.

HOLY CRAP. 150 BONUS BASE DAMAGE? FOR 35 SECONDS!??! That makes ichigo look bad dude. 50% physical and magic defense with a giant ass health increase with a giant ass attack bonus for a long ass 50 seconds. Nerf. Everwhere. Pl0x. Madness. Madness everywhere.

2ND DEFAULT SKILL
DEVOURED SOULS (Passive) (Damage Type:None)

Everytime Asura kills his/her victims, he also take their souls by swallowing them and making him stronger. He can also use this as a part of his strength.
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TOOLTIPS:

- for every creeps he killed, Asura gains 1 soul (MP)
- for every enemy heroes he killed, Asura gains 20 souls (MP)
- 1 soul is equal to +1 Base Damage, +10 Max Health Bonus
- Only a maximum of 150 souls only.

-jimsonji you must change it or else............
-150 souls in a default skill is a big no no...
- try to change damage to base dmg then hp to max health


it's too IMBA if you collect 150 souls then you had lvl3 ulti skill. Take note for that.....

My Aono says "two thumbs down" LOL
Make it improve OK

About the Max Health and Base Damage, I've got a little confusion for that. However, I changed it immediately.....

- reduce 10% of physical damage

-DMG cannot be reduced this way, change it to grants X armor.

- Only a maximum of 150 souls only.

-150 DMG and 1500 HP for free? No thx.
-2 Default like this are imba.

- Has a chance to become a human drill towards to the enemy target and
pushes its target in a range of 600 and have a critical strike of 3.0

-Information missing.
-% to critical?
-Scale the DMG increment properly.
-That % to become human drill, explain how it works, you have to attack.. etc.

LV1 5: blocks 1500 of Damage (Physical/Spell)

-Physical and Spell but not Uknown?
-Weak barrier imo, and concept already used on Sarara.

- has a range of 1500
LVL 1: takes 500 DPS to enemy units then 60% slow in MS (Requires 50 souls as a cost)

-2500 total DMG and 60% slow, you mad dude.
-1500 range means casting range or its max reachable range (e.g. Nanoha Divine Buster with 1700 Range)

- turns into monstrous state
- lasts 50 sec
- Cooldown: 150 sec
- 20% cleaving damage (300 AoE)
- Lasts 60 sec
- Cooldown 150 sec

-Wait what?. Transformation lasts 50s and cleaving lasts 60s?
-Why did you write cooldown twice? Don't tell me they are 2 different skills lololol.

LVL 3: reduce 50% damage (physical/spell) then +2000HP and +80% Base Damage (Requires 100 souls as a cost)

-Sup dude, another haxxor killing machine, definitely no.
-50% DMG reduction, for god sake...
-2000 HP... well...
-80% Base Damage...

• A lot of work needed on this suggestion if you want to stand any chance.

Changes stats growth to =, instead of ==.
200 MS?.

- 3 souls is equal to +1 Damage, +30 hp Bonus.
- Only a maximum of 150 souls only.

-50 DMG 1500 HP free bonus? Max 1k hp kk thx.

- Has a chance to become a human drill.

-I already told you to give more information about this, I won't write it again.

LV1 5: blocks 1500 of Damage (unknown)

-It does not block Physical nor Magic?

- lasts 55 sec.
CD 120/90/60.

-Haruhi is QQ'ing.

I updated my asura pls check:)

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[quote="Aria.OwNs"]Changes stats growth to =, instead of ==.
200 MS?.

- 3 souls is equal to +1 Damage, +30 hp Bonus.
- Only a maximum of 150 souls only.

-50 DMG 1500 HP free bonus? Max 1k hp kk thx.

- Has a chance to become a human drill.

-I already told you to give more information about this, I won't write it again.

LV1 5: blocks 1500 of Damage (unknown)

-It does not block Physical nor Magic?

- lasts 55 sec.
CD 120/90/60.

Aria i change it now pls look
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Dravirus wrote:I created the spells to test, and my opinion is...
2 default passive skills? a little over-power.
Asura Shield is a little too good...
cooldown don't need to get littler...
the other powers are good to me.
i give a 7/10.

At my eyes the concept is the same, I reject to review it unless you COMPLETELY change it.

You are given 24 hrs to merge your post or i will remove the latest ones.

Is there any latest to his post? May I know it???

1st default...

TOOLTIPS:

-Grants 5 armor.
-Gain health by 500.
-Last 20 secs.
-CD 20 secs.

duration and cd? 20 secs both?

2nd default

TOOLTIPS:

-for every creeps he killed, Asura gains 1 soul (MP).
-for every enemy heroes he killed, Asura gains 20 souls (MP).
-3 souls is equal to +1 Damage.
-For each 1 soul Asura gets +10hp bonus.
-Only a maximum of 150 souls only.

so 1500 hp and +50 damage.....
maybe its is too high for low level

1st skill

TOOLTIPS:

-A new (Q)skill will appear called Vajra Beam.
-He becomes a range type with an attack range of 600 that fires an orb.
-Buff placer stock.
-Require souls to use.

-cd 40 because cd of vajra is 30 right?
-Deal Damage 10x the souls with 1000 range and Aoe 150. "i didnt get it"


stock? you mean stacks..

Read this https://abcwc3.forumotion.com/t435-format-for-requesting-a-character and fix your suggestion.

2ND DEFAULT SKILL DEVOURED SOULS (Passive) (Damage Type:None)


Everytime Asura kills his/her victims, he also take their souls by swallowing them and making him stronger. He can also use this as a part of his strength.
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TOOLTIPS:

-for every creeps he killed, Asura gains 1 soul (MP).
-for every enemy heroes he killed, Asura gains 20 souls (MP).
-2 souls is equal to +1 Damage.
-For each 1 soul Asura gets +10hp bonus.
-Only a maximum of 100 souls.
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Datailed Information

- If Asura has been killed all souls are reset and all the stats growth gain by this effect is remove too.
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hahahaa just like nemuru

soul terms but different in usage...

2nd Skill: Victims' Soul Recolection [Passive][Damage Type: Magic]
As the Kushinada's Family Hunter whos destiny was chosen even before she was born, her duty is to hunt without rest those wild souls that are not pure anymore. The hunter and those who were nearby her made a pact, to not consume souls anymore, this way, impure souls are purged by Nemuru, but instead of consumed, she keeps them to fill her energy when she is weak.
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Everytime Nemuru kills an unit, its soul is stolen.
Each soul adds Magical DMG to Nemuru's attacks, which is dealt within 300 AoE of the attacked unit by Nemuru.
If a hero is killed, his soul will be taken and Nemuru will recover HP.
Souls will be consumed automatically when Nemuru's HP is below 15%.
Up to 30 souls.
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Lvl 1: Each soul adds 7 DMG. Each soul heals 20 HP. Nemuru is healed by 300 everytime she kills a hero.
Lvl 2: Each soul adds 9 DMG. Each soul heals 30 HP. Nemuru is healed by 600 everytime she kills a hero.
Lvl 3: Each soul adds 11 DMG. Each soul heals 40 HP. Nemuru is healed by 900 everytime she kills a hero.
Lvl 4: Each soul adds 13 DMG. Each soul heals 50 HP. Nemuru is healed by 1200 everytime she kills a hero.
Lvl 5: Each soul adds 15 DMG. Each soul heals 60 HP. Nemuru is healed by 1500 everytime she kills a hero.

Use color bbcode and make it black, because with spoiler it's impossible to read without a mouse or ctrl button

alright then, i forgot using quotes, ehem.....

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