[Kore Wa Zombie Desu Ka?] Eucliwood Hellscythe

As what we talked in the Garena Group, here's what I promised >w<


Hero Name: Eucliwood Hellscythe
Title: Underworld's Seventh Abyss Leader
Anime: Kore wa Zombie Desu ka?

Background Story
Eucliwood, called Eu (ユー Yū?) for short, is a necromancer who brought Ayumu back to life to be her guard and has been living with him since. Her magic is so powerful that she has to wear heavy armor and suppress her emotions in order to control it. Her words also carry strong magic, and she is able to kill someone just by saying "Die" (for example, when she takes on Kyoko and says "Die" multiple times, draining the latter's life supply), so she avoids talking and instead communicates through written notes, mostly pertaining to her appetite. She experiences severe pain whenever her magic is activated, and she claims that even if she were to die her magic would continue uncontrolled. She is also capable of becoming a Masō-Shōjo, and it is implied that she interned at Matelis under Ariel. It is shown that she does care about Ayumu even though she considers him to be her servant, therefore she may have feelings for Ayumu, but cannot express them currently. Ayumu constantly provides her with comfort when she thinks about her many insecurities and she is shown to take these feelings to heart. Out of all of the girls, Eu seems to have the closest relationship with him. She does not like people talking about death or telling them to go die since, as she takes on the pain of anyone she heals, revives or kills, she understands the pain of dying despite being immortal herself.

Attributes
Endurance
========== [7]
Swiftness
========== [4]
Potency
========== [7]
Resistance
========== [5]
Speed
========== [4]

Stat Growth
Edurance
==
Swiftness
=
Potency
==

Extra Information:
Attack Range: 500 (Range)
Base Speed: 230
Missile Speed:: 380

Default Skill - Hellscythe of the Underworld[Damage: None][Target: Self]
- Transforms her tickler pad paper and her ballpoint pen into a Hellscythe, turning her into a melee fighter, gaining an additional 20% of her total damage. Hellscythe of the Underworld remains unless Eu is defeated.

Cooldown: 30 seconds

1st Skill: Hellscythe Dash and Slash[Damage: Physical][Target: Enemy/Ground]
Requires: Hellscythe of the Underworld
- Eucliwood dashes to a designated target/location and slashes everything that will be on her way, dealing physical damage and maims them.
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Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Instant
Cast Time: Instant
Cast Range: 300

Effect:
- Eucliwood dashes straightly to her target or a targeted location and slashes everything on her way, dealing 100/200/300/400/500 Physical Damage + 20%/40%/60%/80%/100% of her physical attack and maims them for .5/1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds. Orb Effect items stack with the skill.

Cooldown: 15 seconds

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2nd Skill: Take Over[Damage: None][Target: Allies]
- Eucliwood heals her teammate, in exchange for her Life Energy.
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Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Gradual
Cast Time: Channeling
Cast Range: 1000 (From center of the caster)

Effect:
- Eu recovers her allies' HP by taking over their pain. She pays 50%/45%/40%/35%/30% of her current HP in the action and recover allies' HP by 50% of their Max HP over 8/7/6/5/4 seconds.

Cooldown: 30 seconds
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3rd Skill: Abyssal Imprisonment[Damage: Magical][Target: Ground]
- Eu hereby calls the Seventh Abyss of the Underworld, lock enemies by surrounding them and casting magic with an on-going damage.

Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Instant
Cast Time: Channeling
Cast Range: 300
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Effect:
- Eu calls the Seventh Abyss of the Underworld to aid her in battle by locking enemies in an Abyss Prison and deals 100/200/300/400/500 Magic Damage per second + 25% of enemies' Max HP for 1.5/2/2.5/3/3.5 seconds within 600 AoE. Spell can be interrupted with any altered state or movement.

Cooldown: 25 seconds
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Ultimate: The Center of Everything[Damage: None][Target: Enemy]
- Eucliwood Hellscythe, as the center of everything, steals an ability from her enemies.

Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Instant
Cast Time: Instant
Cast Range: 400
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Effect:
- Eu is a source of magic power, can steal an ability from her enemies, an ultimate or not, and can hold the ability for 60/120/180 seconds. Level of the skill stolen depends from the source.
Lv 1 - 100% chance of getting a Random 1st - 3rd skill or 10% chance of getting an ultimate. 60 seconds.
Lv 2 - 100% chance of getting a Random 1st - 3rd skill or 20% chance of getting an ultimate. 120 seconds.
Lv 3 - 100% chance of getting a Random 1st - 3rd skill or 35% chance of getting an ultimate. 180
The ability stolen disappears if the duration is reached or Eu is defeated.
Cooldown: 300/290/280 seconds


Watcha think guys? It's hard to think on her skills, since she barely shown any in the anime. This isn't final. I'll continue to edit this if necessary. If you have any questions/concerns regarding her, feel free to ask. :) Again, this ISN'T FINAL.

Rakuro_Kamigama wrote:
But Eucliwood's already in game. Thomas would be picking his skills for her though. And he said that if you got a good enough skill set he might use it but he needs to edit it.


Yeaaah, I'll still review this.


27 out of 23 to 27 skill points. Yeah that seems popular around here.
You forgot to add the skill growth, or did that got called off in the suggestions?

Attack Range - Mind telling the missile speed? And what's her BAT once her Default skill is used.

First SKill

- I'm not going to be able to judge that since I don't know the basic concept of power growth in ABC

Second Skill

- Maybe it would be better if the healing effect you give to your allies increase and your health loss is around 30%?

Third Skill

- What's the range? What's the range of the attack, the AOE?

Ulti Skill

- That ulti skill is not really... needed here in ABC. Maybe for Konata. I do not think we need an ability like that. An Ulti is supposed to be unique. But then again that's just my opinion. It looks like a good ability but I doubt it will be allowed here.

Also, here are some other related things I found here

I think the Default Skill and First Skill cooldown is flawed. Since you can only use the Default skill every minute, you can only used the first skill for every minute. That kinda stinks. Either get ride of the 'require default' or lessen the cooldown in the default

What will be her style of battle? Support?
By the way image is missing

Edit: I have added my colour

Regarding the first skill, don't you think it's kinda powerful? After all, orb effect items stack with it.

Thank you for pinpointing the missing there :D

Updated. You kinda didn't read some things there :)

Rakuro_Kamigama wrote:Power doesn't mean a damn if you can't use it for time to time.
Maybe shorten the damage by a bit. But

Default Skill - Hellscythe of the Underworld[Damage: None][Target: Self]
- Transforms her tickler pad paper and her ballpoint pen into a Hellscythe, turning her into a melee fighter, gaining an additional 20% of her total damage.

Cooldown: 30 seconds

1st Skill: Hellscythe Dash and Slash[Damage: Physical][Target: Enemy/Ground]
Requires: Hellscythe of the Underworld
- Eucliwood dashes to a designated target/location and slashes everything that will be on her way, dealing physical damage and maims them.
--------------------------------------
Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Instant
Cast Time: Instant
Cast Range: 300

Effect:
- Eucliwood dashes straightly to her target or a targeted location and slashes everything on her way, dealing 100/200/300/400/500 Physical Damage + 20%/40%/60%/80%/100% of her physical attack and maims them for .5/1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds. Orb Effect items stack with the skill.

Cooldown: 15 seconds

How come the first skill's cooldown is shorter than the default one? It would be better if the default skill is the one with the 15 sec cooldown and the first skill has the 30 sec cooldown. Maybe just tweak the damage by a bit.

2nd Skill: Take Over[Damage: None][Target: Allies]
- Eucliwood heals her teammate, in exchange for her Life Energy.
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Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Gradual
Cast Time: Channeling
Cast Range: 1000 (From center of the caster)

Effect:
- Eu recovers her allies' HP by taking over their pain. She pays 50%/45%/40%/35%/30% of her current HP in the action and recover allies' HP by 50% of their Max HP over 8/7/6/5/4 seconds.

Cooldown: 30 seconds

I'm not sure I'd be using that skill if I play on ABC. The lesser time is a nice touch but the cooldown might be a little too long.

Endurance
========== [7]
Swiftness
========== [4]
Potency
========== [7]
Resistance
========== [5]
Speed
========== [4]

Stat Growth
Edurance
==
Swiftness
=
Potency
==

Most skills that are above 7 bars are coloured green, not yellow. Below 4 would be red.

Extra Information:
Attack Range: 500 (Range)
Base Speed: 230

Missile Speed? How bout the speed the ranged attack travels? Like 500 or 400.

3rd Skill: Abyssal Imprisonment[Damage: Magical][Target: Ground]
- Eu hereby calls the Seventh Abyss of the Underworld, lock enemies by surrounding them and casting magic with an on-going damage.

Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Instant
Cast Time: Channeling
Cast Range: 300
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Effect:
- Eu calls the Seventh Abyss of the Underworld to aid her in battle by locking enemies in an Abyss Prison and deals 75/150/225/300/375 Magic Damage + 25% of enemies' Max HP for 1.5/2/2.5/3/3.5 seconds within 600 AoE. Spell can be interrupted with any altered state or movement.

So if I have 10,000 health, on the max level of that I'd take a total of 2,875 damage. And if 5,000 I take 1,875 damage. Seems reasonable. But how much damage would be dealt each second? I figured this was a DPS skill but it has to have like 500 damage per second or 200 damage per wave if you're making one.

Ultimate: The Center of Everything[Damage: None][Target: Enemy]
- Eucliwood Hellscythe, as the center of everything, steals an ability from her enemies.

Ability Type: Active
Ability Effect: Instant
Cast Time: Instant
Cast Range: 400
------------------------------------------------
Effect:
- Eu is a source of magic power, can steal an ability from her enemies, an ultimate or not, and can hold the ability for 60/120/180 seconds. Level of the skill stolen depends from the source.
Lv 1 - 100% chance of getting a Random 1st - 3rd skill or 10% chance of getting an ultimate. 60 seconds.
Lv 2 - 100% chance of getting a Random 1st - 3rd skill or 20% chance of getting an ultimate. 120 seconds.
Lv 3 - 100% chance of getting a Random 1st - 3rd skill or 35% chance of getting an ultimate. 180 seconds.
The ability stolen disappears if the duration is reached or Eu is defeated.
Cooldown: 300/290/280 seconds

No comment here.

You kinda didn't read some things there :)

I didn't kinda read some things? Please clarify what you say :)\':

I'll try to edit things as much as possible, and as I said, it's not yet final. I'm still working on it. With regards of the Abyssal Imprisonment, I do believe you won't reach 10k HP without the Sphere Item with Spell reduction, and it's per second. Sorry my bad, I have tons of work so I forgot to put it. With regards her 2nd skill, I made it 30 seconds so it won't be too imba. 50% Max HP regeneration in 4 seconds is kinda annoying, you know :) Unless if you're the one using her.

But what you don't know is, we already settled this in the Garena group. I don't care about the offense though. I didn't bother editing this since it's already talked about. I wonder when was this posted...

Fine, do as you want. You don't even know what we're talking in the group since you're not in there. If the group was nothing, then why is it more active than this forum? You're the one to talk.

If what you always do is judge and offense, you better go off to court >.>

OmegaSui wrote:

Fine, do as you want.

Conclusion : You do whatever you want. I do whatever I want

You don't even know what we're talking in the group since you're not in there. If the group was nothing, then why is it more active than this forum? You're the one to talk.

Activity of a bunch of random people surely is a good thing.
Active =/= Productive nor Effective. Your arguement is invalid. Anyone with more or less half a brain would realize this hero is made of 2 repeated skills and 3 random skills.

If what you always do is judge and offense, you better go off to court >.>

There was none. Not that I know of your offensive taking limits.

Oh, random people, you say? So Thomasinow, Uoyalz, PKW are random. Cool story bro. Don't talk if you don't know anything there. Try to do a little more research.

PS. Try to check what you're typing. Maybe you're misspelling some words.

OmegaSui wrote:Frankly speaking PKW would give half a fuck or none, Uoyalz bug testing, tom modeling. Thing is, either they didn't read or didn't care enough to read, because those skills are pathetic. Hence the rest of my argument <-(there, happy?).

Now I know why talk like that. You thought that you're better than them.

Now there's no point of me talking to you anymore.

Why you didn't give a word about thomasinow? He's the one I mostly talk in the group.

You conclude and judge so fast.

OmegaSui wrote:

Why you didn't give a word about thomasinow

.

tom modeling

?

Either way I was just pissed because I thought this part

we already settled this in the Garena group

meant that this would be the base for the hero to be implemented in ABC. Good thing it isn't.

But too bad, some of parts of her skills were taken, just got edited a little bit.

And still you call them random? You got a sense of humor mate. Being pissed with that part is not an excuse of calling them random people.

If any staff can lock or put this thread in the trash bin, please do so now. I can't stand talking with this team helper who seem to just insult and offense new users thinking that he's so "pro".

No one admits what he really is.

And you should also resize your Reimu Hakurei signature pic or hide it in spoiler,
as it can easily make people pissed.(i know that some people may like it - but mostly pissed)

Rakuro_Kamigama wrote:And Sui is back, with a blunt answer that can make children cry! No offense. But hey, that's what makes your suggestion reviews great and to the point

Rakuro_Kamigama already give you a warning about Sui o-o;;
if u are easily offended by Sui comment and want to bombard at him, how will anyone accept ur skillset - since the copy Ulti can be removed easily.(is it really that usefull?)

KudryavkaNoumi wrote:Fine, do as you want. You don't even know what we're talking in the group since you're not in there. If the group was nothing, then why is it more active than this forum? You're the one to talk.

If what you always do is judge and offense, you better go off to court >.>

i'm pretty sure he doesn't need to be in there since he is the forum skill suggestion reviewer in here..
it's part of him to judge skill set.(anyhow you should also imagine that if your Eucliwood is in ABC and how will you use her)

No offense >,...,<;;
But you can also see that many suggestion has been commented by Sui.(including me)