[Freezing] Satellizer el Bridget

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Satellizer el Bridget
She is a member of the noble el Bridget family despite being the child of the Head of the family, Howard el Bridget and his mistress,Noelle Allouache.
She was formerly ranked the number one second-year Pandora before being demoted to the 2nd rank due to Kazuya's interference during a tournament. Known as the "Untouchable Queen" for her intense aphephobia, she is feared by the students for her cold and ruthless personality.

Stats
Max Health
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Attack Speed
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Base Damage
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Defense
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Move Speed
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Attack type : Melee

Stats growth :
Max Health
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Base damage
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Attack speed
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Default skill : Untouchable Queen [Passive]
Due to the abuse she suffered, she hates being touched and goes berserk if anyone touches her.
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Have 15% chances to avoid incoming physical attacks and have 7% chance to goes berserk mode.
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Berserk mode : give 10% attack power,10% attack speed and 10% movement speed
but -10 armor last 10 secs
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Skill :

Accelerating Turn [Q] <Active : Buff>
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Increase Attack Speed and Movement Speed for a while.
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Level 1 - Increasing attack speed by 10% and movement speed by 5% last 8 seconds
Level 2 - Increasing attack speed by 20% and movement speed by 10% last 13 seconds
Level 3 - Increasing attack speed by 30% and movement speed by 15% last 18 seconds
Level 4 - Increasing attack speed by 40% and movement speed by 20% last 23 seconds
Level 5 - Increasing attack speed by 50% and movement speed by 25% last 28 seconds
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Cooldown : 15/20/25/30/35
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*Special Skill*
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Double Accelrating Turn [Q] <Special Active>
**ONLY usable in Accelerating Turn mode
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By Increasing more Attack Speed and Movement Speed from Accelerating Turn to become
Double Accelrating Turn make her gain an incredible speed and attack in AoE.
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Double Accel : Deals dmg = [Effect time left x 25/30/35/40/45]
(400 AoE)
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For Ex. - Using level 1 Accelerating Turn you have 8 seconds before the times run out and activating Double Accelerating Turn then the damage was 8*25= 200
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Freezing [W] <Active : Debuff>
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Create a freezing area that slow enemies movement and attack speed.
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Create 500 AoE and remain on the ground and it only effect when you stand in the AoE.
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Level 1 - slow movement speed for 20% and attack speed for 10% last 6 secs
Level 2 - slow movement speed for 35% and attack speed for 15% last 7 secs
Level 3 - slow movement speed for 50% and attack speed for 20% last 8 secs
Level 4 - slow movement speed for 65% and attack speed for 25% last 9 secs
Level 5 - slow movement speed for 80% and attack speed for 30% last 10 secs
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Cooldown : 23/26/29/32/35
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**Freezing effect pic**

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Pride of Life [E] <Active>
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Because of her mother apologizes for what she had gone through and tells her to never lose and to become stronger than anyone before she died.
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Start the wing of light at her back and slash enemy for 7 Hits. <attack 2 secs>
while attack player become Invulnerable.
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Level 1 - Deals 50 damages each hit and 1 second stun time
Level 2 - Deals 100 damages each hit and 1.25 second stun time
Level 3 - Deals 150 damages each hit and 1.5 second stun time
Level 4 - Deals 200 damages each hit and 1.75 second stun time
Level 5 - Deals 250 damages each hit and 2 second stun time
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Cooldown: 35 seconds
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*Stun effect after dealing damage
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**pic for wing of light**


Pandora Strike [T] <Active>
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Start Pandora mode the Pandora have physical changes
(silvery-white hair, yellow eyes, and blue rings around their wrists and ankles)
(In this mode she will also has shining light blue aura around herself)
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Dash forward to the enemies with high speed, slashing everyone who standing in her way.
<600 AoE> **this skill has 500 attack range**

(make info look cool and yes friendly units not take damage XD
or make like info said is better OMG slashing friendly units)
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Delay time 2 secs for casting (play sound Pandora mode, Activated!! in Japanese)
**Attack 10 hits and slashing 3 secs
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Level 1 - Deals 300 damage each hit
Level 2 - Deals 450 damage each hit
Level 3 - Deals 600 damage each hit
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Cooldown: 140/130/120 seconds
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**pic for pandora mode**




Update !! ver. 1.1b
Default skill : Untouchable Queen [Passive]
Have 15% chances to avoid incoming physical attacks and 5% chance to avoid any damage for 2 seconds
Accelerating Turn [Q]
Change cooldown and edit AS and MS
Double Accelrating Turn [Q]
Change the way to Deals dmg = [Effect time left x 25/30/35/40/45] AoE
Tempest Turn [W]
add cooldown each level and give silence
Pride of Life [E]
add stun effect after dealing damage
Pandora Mode [T]
because of blink-strike attacks remove AS

Update!! ver. 1.2
Change Stats growth : from Defense to Max Health.
Improve Default skill : Change some info and now give 7% chance to reflect physical attacks.
Improve 1st skill : reduce cooldown to 15/20/25/30/35
Improve special skill : add more info and give example for damage and also have 400 AoE.
Improve 2nd skill : attack make 500 AoE.
Improve 3rd skill : change some info.
Improve Ulti skill : have blue aura around user.

Update!! ver. 1.2b
Improve Default skill : add 5% berserk mode in berserk mode give attack power, attack speed and movement speed
Change 2nd skill : from Tempest Turn to Freezing and add pic for freezing effect
Improve 3rd skill : add while attacking player become Invul

Update!! ver. 1.2c
Improve Default skill : remove deflection , change 5% to 7% chance to goes berserk and have -10 armor during berserk.
Improve 2nd skill : add more cooldown from original to 23/26/29/32/35
Improve 3rd skill : correct word inval to Invulnerable and the attack take 2 secs

Update!! ver. 1.3
Improve 3rd skill : add wing of light pic
Change Ulti skill : from buff Pandora Mode to Pandora Strike add more cooldown and reduce each level skill up 140/130/120 and also add pic for pandora mode look like.

Update!! ver. 1.3b
Improve 2nd skill : change slow movement speed from original to 20/35/50/65/80% reduction and duration to 6/7/8/9/10 secs
Change Ulti skill : remove invulnerable and stun effect.

Update ver. 1.1b
please take a look and thank you :D
and update her pic

Just update her pic
and want some comment from you omegasui-san
Thanks :D

It's not like there's anything else for me to do here, wouldn't want to bother with numbers cuz ToM's gonna do it (if it gets picked),haven't watch the anime so can't suggest anything else.

Selphiroth please stop continously double/triple posting...

Once you guys have the skills sorted out your descriptions will need to be approved by the chief editor i.e. ME (self-appointed).

ahh.. sorry for that but about post 4-5 days once I don't know it call double post or not if it true then really sorry
and thanks for a little comment that help me omegasui
finally just only hope my suggest char will be in ABC :)
(less percent cause according from ToM said he has many char to add)

The character need srsly stick out or skills set just purely original to be put in the map.

Wait i thought you're the one who'll do the description? (lulz tried to do your work but look at what i've done....)

Your work really far greater than mine :)
waited for the end of my final exam (Tommorow last day)
I will improve her more and more to become the great one.
heh heh.. don't know I can do or not =w="

This "Guy"'s Stats Is Too High.... :shock:

Update for 1.2
improve and change some info

1.Default skill : As the description mentioned, why not % to actually activate Berserk?
2.1st skill seems ok though it'd be a pain in the @ss to make.
3.2nd skill 's cd increment should not be 5 each lvl, but 2~3 secs each lvl.
4.3rd skill: what happens during the attack? Is she invul? How fast does she attack? Like other multi hit skills?
5. Is it me or you're using the same suggestion concept as i do :)) even highlighted the changes...
6. Need st else than just nuke and nuke dukem. There are some other unused skills, like frost armor ... Try play campaign and see if you can make any use of it, nicely done and not much trigger needed.

1. ah!?! forget about berserk ... and to think about this what does berserk like? like buff?
when activated give ... attack MS AS or something ?

2. yes 1st skill and special active one may a pain to make but look cool lol
(Just my thought)

3. Oh too much for 5 seconds? well will reduce it down to 3 secs

4. 3rd skill about invul just thinking but not fixed it and it should be like that
I'm about to make it that way

5. It me not you .. :D
but I think red and yellow color is good to see so I just use like you
and about the changes thing yes I copy O..O" do you mind if I use your pattern ?

6. well I still rookie at this I just think and make skill according from anime and put some of my thought
for new skill if anime has not enough so I don't know the right way of making one char for ABC
I want to ask you and please give me more advice about skill of char
such as what skill in one char should be ok (not mine that you said nuke nuke and dukem)
and this... "The character need srsly stick out or skills set" do you mean that in one char
should have skill combo right? then what to do ... ?

@_@ start to confused

*edit what frost armor mean?

1. Berserk gives more AS and some minor effect but takes extra dmg.
2. Yes it is.
3. K
4. Do it soon.
5. Not at all. Just feel weird to have another one using red and yellow.
6. Skills should sync really good, or unique. And i already told you , you can create some skills not from anime but on your own.
Frost armor, try play Lich in campaign.(+ armor, obviously, - atk speed of melee units that atk the one with frost armor buff). Just saying, there're basic skills concept that works perfectly fine and not yet used ( Mana shield )

omegasui wrote:4.3rd skill: what happens during the attack? Is she invul? How fast does she attack? Like other multi hit skills?

ehh.. what do you mean? How fast ? ... like attack 7 hits in 2 seconds ?
my thought just like Grimmjow's Rush skill maybe attack like that :)


and yes I'm about changing 2nd skill to the debuff one

omegasui wrote:3.2nd skill 's cd increment should not be 5 each lvl, but 2~3 secs each lvl.
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forget to ask about cooldown increment should not be 5 each lvl...
if that include other skill like my 1st skill cd increase 5 each lvl
should I reduce it to 3 secs ?


Update for 1.2b :)

Default skill : i meant to get rid of the deflection and give berserk mode instead. Unit during berserk should take more dmg.
1st skill : keep it that way.
2nd skill : CD too short. Should be a constant of 25~30.
3rd skill : It's Invulnerable. How long does it take to land all 7 hits?
Ulti : I myself never get the standard of blink-strike , it's a friggin Arena game with full of AoE spells and all, why would you need blink-strike?

omegasui wrote:Ulti : I myself never get the standard of blink-strike , it's a friggin Arena game with full of AoE spells and all, why would you need blink-strike?

first time I think I want it like Ichigo Hollow mask so I add blink-strike
how about change ulti? to an attack skill? single or AoE would better? :?:

Update!! 1.2c

IDK never watched the anime.
If you could provide something else, cool. Too much buffs and overused concepts.

Update!! ver. 1.3

change ulti skill and add some pics :)


**Edit** want to ask you Omegasui-san about to have casting time on skill
my ulti skill has 2 secs casting time(and yes it will be really good if while casting to have sfx)
before dashing to the select AoE and I choose 500 range to dash to the select AoE
and because of ulti skill I'm about to make 3rd skill to have a casting time too
what do you think? :D

thanks

Whatever you say, you give the skills i give my help.

Ulti seems too overwhelming. Too much invul. Don't make it impossible to move out of AoE by stun or whatsoever. Instead, make skill 3 has effect to NOT be able to move out of its AoE(lessen the duration and increase CD , obviously), or just freezes from 1 to 2 secs.

ummm... you right
well I think skill 3 is ok cause it single target not AoE
and invul for 2 secs according to the time while attack

problem was ulti has to fixed
how about get rid of invul and reduce stun to 1/1.5/2 ?

and about 600 AoE and 500 range How big and far it is?

Don't make it impossible to move out of AoE by stun or whatsoever. Instead, make skill 3 has effect to NOT be able to move out of its AoE(lessen the duration and increase CD , obviously), or just freezes from 1 to 2 secs.

This is what i had in mine, to force synchronization between skills.

Holy crap...Sorry i meant skill 2.

It's like this. Skill 2 create a field which functions the same as Thrall's field or greatly reduces MS(80% at max level)/average AS reduces(30% at max level). Ulti has no delay, less damage (why do you even need multi hit anyway?It's not like they're gonna miss). Caster is not invul while casting ulti, enemies in AoE are not disabled->Certainly no stun. 600 AoE is normal for an ulti.

ahhh.. then for 2nd skill add more slow MS? at lv max to 80% ?
and at lv 1 = ? (if 40/50/60/70/80 is it too much?)
can I stay at that cooldown but reduce the duration?
(duration 5/8/11/14/17 ?)

and about ulti sure while casting can be hit but at first I only make invul while attacking ... then have to get rid of invul and stun cause will
use 2nd skill to synchronize with ulti am I right?

ah!! forget to tell that why I need multi slash... umm maybe it look cool
Casting(charge) 3 secs and dashing to AoE select and slash! slash! slash! like when Ichigo use his
hollow mask(In ABC) like blink-attack slash up down left right until finished up 10 times look cool more than one slash and end... just my option so don't know :D

20/35/50/65/80% MS reduction
10/15/20/25/30% AS reduction
Same CD, duration 6/7/8/9/10.
Then ditch the invul + stun lolhazard stuffs.

Idk why ppl like blink-strike and multi hit skills , just asking, cuz i'd rather strength than agility(even in real life).

Update!! 1.3b

improve 2nd skill and remove effect in ulti skill

and still thinking about 3rd skill to have cast time+dash range toward target
in condition like this what do you think ? or skip cast time and add dash range only?
or do nothing (if ask me I want dash range :D and the truth cast time for sfx XD)

and thanks for helping again :D