[Touhou] Flandre Scarlet

Well, I decided to come up with a skill set for another hero. At first I thought of Hayate but then I didn't want to think of another glass cannon hero. I wanted a hero who is a little different from the other heroes, so I thought of my one of my favourite characters from Touhou. Please comment on it (I hope it's not too imba...)


Flandre Scarlet
-Sister of the Devil-

Flandre is the younger sister of Remilia Scarlet and the "dirty little secret" of the Scarlet Devil Mansion. Because of her unstable personality and incredibly destructive power, her sister has had her ordered not to get out of the mansion for nearly 500 years. (503 as of 2011) She has never had any contact with anyone except her sister, Sakuya the head maid, and the other fairy maids. During the events of the Scarlet Mist incident, Flan was in her room as Marisa and Reimu fought her elder sister Remilia. During Marisa/Reimu's second visit to the mansion they encountered Flan who came out of her room to play.


Stats
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Default Skill
Destructive Little Devil

When a vampire attacks a human, they generally try to take their prey alive so they can suck the victim's blood afterwards, but Flandre has always been fed with cooked dishes so she doesn't know how to properly attack a human. Whenever she attacks, she tends to not hold back and blow them up without leaving a spot of blood...
-20% to deal 1.5x critical damage. 30% if the enemy Hero is below 20% health. 15% to OHKO non-hero units.

1st Skill
Taboo "Lävateinn"

The magic wand/sword forged by the Norse God Loki and used by the fire giant Surt in Ragnarok, the Norse equivalent of the Apocalypse. How little Flan got her hands on this weapon of mass destruction is better left unanswered...
-LVL 1: Deals 600 damage to a single target. All other enemies in the line of 400 range and 300 radius take 75% of the damage.
-LVL 1: Deals 900 damage to a single target. All other enemies in the line of 450 range and 300 radius take 75% of the damage.
-LVL 1: Deals 1200 damage to a single target. All other enemies in the line of 500 range and 300 radius take 75% of the damage.
-LVL 1: Deals 1500 damage to a single target. All other enemies in the line of 550 range and 300 radius take 75% of the damage.
-LVL 1: Deals 1800 damage to a single target. All other enemies in the line of 600 range and 300 radius take 75% of the damage.

Cooldown: 25 seconds

2nd Skill
Taboo "Four of a Kind"

Flandre splits into four and track down the enemy while shooting danmaku around her. Clones take 200% damage and deal 50% damage. After the main target dies, clones will attack the unit with the lowest HP within 500 radius.
-LVL 1: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 300 AOE of each clone take 80 damage per second. Lasts 3 seconds.
-LVL 2: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 350 AOE of each clone take 80 damage per second. Lasts 4 seconds.
-LVL 3: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 400 AOE of each clone take 80 damage per second. Lasts 5 seconds.
-LVL 4: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 450 AOE of each clone take 80 damage per second. Lasts 6 seconds.
-LVL 5: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 500 AOE of each clone take 80 damage per second. Lasts 7 seconds.

Cooldown: 35 seconds

3rd Skill
Q.E.D. "Ripples of 495 Years"

The pent-up frustrations of 495 year's worth of imprisonment. This is Flandre's most devastating attack. Q.E.D.
-LVL 1: Does damage overtime within 600 AOE. First wave does 10 damage. Each wave does additional 20 damage. 0.3secs/wave. Lasts 3 seconds. Magic immune while channeling.
-LVL 2: Does damage overtime within 700 AOE. First wave does 20 damage. Each wave does additional 25 damage. 0.3secs/wave. Lasts 3 seconds. Magic immune while channeling.
-LVL 3: Does damage overtime within 800 AOE. First wave does 30 damage. Each wave does additional 30 damage. 0.3secs/wave. Lasts 3 seconds. Magic immune while channeling.
-LVL 4: Does damage overtime within 900 AOE. First wave does 40 damage. Each wave does additional 35 damage. 0.3secs/wave. Lasts 3 seconds. Magic immune while channeling.
-LVL 5: Does damage overtime within 1000 AOE. First wave does 50 damage. Each wave does additional 40 damage. 0.3secs/wave. Lasts 3 seconds. Magic immune while channeling.

Cooldown: 30 seconds

Ultimate
Power of Destruction

Flandre uses her destructive powers to obilerate her opponents.
-LVL 1: 10% chance to instantly kill the target when using a spell if target's current HP is lower than 50% of Flandre's
-LVL 2: 10% chance to instantly kill the target when using a spell if target's current HP is lower than 100% Flandre's
-LVL 3: 10% chance to instantly kill the target when using a spell if target's current HP is lower than 150% Flandre's


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-Ulti only works if Flan targets a unit, meaning it will NOT when using 3rd skill.
-Ulti only works upon activation of spells, eg, it triggers when Flan uses 2nd skill on the target, NOT when the illus spam their bullets.
-2nd skill summons illus which work like Haruhi's Celestials, where you can't control them, and they will only attack the main target. When the main target dies, they will aim a nearby enemy instead.
-2nd skill bullets do a total of 720/960/1200/1440/1680 damage.
-3rd skill does total of 1000/1325/1650/1975/2300 damage.
-Default skill OHKO does not work on Tarasque and Azure Dragon.
-I made it so her spells have longer cooldown duration to prevent someone from spamming spells for her ulti.

*EDIT 14/3/2011
-1st skill only targets a single unit and not ground anymore (I'm scared it's not doable like omegasui said)
-2nd skill bullet damage changed to a constant 80, clones take/deal 200%/50% instead of 100%/100%
-2nd skill, after main target dies, clones will target unit with lowest HP within 500 radius
-3rd skill damage lowered. Description now specifies that it's channeling. Changed so Flan is magic immune when casting (just wondering if it'll be an improvement or not)
-Ulti changed to a constant 10%. As level increases, the amount of HP the target needs to be at increases, instead of staying constant like before.

*EDIT 17/3/2011
-3rd skill damage decreased to 1000/1325/1600/1975/2300 damage

uh.. okay...

a question:
it says

-LVL 1: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 300 AOE of each clone take 60 damage per second. Lasts 3 seconds.
-LVL 2: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 350 AOE of each clone take 70 damage per second. Lasts 4 seconds.
-LVL 3: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 400 AOE of each clone take 80 damage per second. Lasts 5 seconds.
-LVL 4: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 450 AOE of each clone take 90 damage per second. Lasts 6 seconds.
-LVL 5: 3 clones which will only attack the main target. Enemies within 500 AOE of each clone take 100 damage per second. Lasts 7 seconds.

did the DPS work like immolation? or like normal unit attack?

The clones can attack the main target like normal unit attack, but the DPS works like immolation

EDIT: Sorry, I mean it's sorta like immolation as it counts as a spell and not physical damage. It's not really like immo since it can stack, thats why it can do a total of 2.1k damage at max level

Notifications should be put under respective skills.

-20% to deal 1.5x critical damage. 30% if the enemy Hero is below 20% health. 15% to OHKO non-hero units.

What's OHKO ?

1st skill : IDK if it's code-able but ...bleh, your tooltip is confusing. Radius AoE?

2nd skill :100% dmg take/deal ? It's like having 4x crit 4x hp and 300 DPS in 500 AoE for 7 seconds @@ Huge damage ratio, huge AoE. Wait, 2k1 dmg is burn damage not total damage, since clones can attack as normal right?Search AoE = ? Will they attack the same target after the 1st target is dead?

3rd skill : Too much damage.With a little holding/disable skills it'll have full effect.

Ulti : Idk about you, i'd rather constant percentage of 15, but change the difference in HP. Target's current HP is lower than 75/100/125% of Flan's.

Immolation is not physical damage. Your mechanic is confusing, please give more details.

OHKO means -> One Hit Knock Out.

First post edited, skills updated. Not sure if 3rd skill is balanced, though, I may update it again later

Updated first post again, 3rd skill damage lowered