(Shaman King) Tao Ren

Name : Tao Ren
Title : Tao family's descendant

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Tao Ren, is a Chinese shaman and initially one of Yoh's most powerful enemies and later his rival to become Shaman King. Ren is serious, logical, and emotionally aloof. He tries hard to maintain a tough and confident exterior, but deep down would risk his life for his allies. Ren is a particularly impatient person with a very short temper, and isn't afraid to hurt the source of the anger. Because of how he was raised amongst dead corpses and spirits he began applying the survival of the fittest rule as a way of overcoming death.




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Endurance
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Swiftness
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Potency
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Resistance
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Move Speed
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Attack type : Melee (120)
BAT : 1.5
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Potency : ==
Swiftness : =


Default Skill ( Passive ) :


Oversoul

Ren’s original Over Soul which integrates Bason's ghost with his Guan Dao, enabling him to materialize onto the physical plane. It’s a Spirit-type O.S which molds Bason's ghost into a giant, golden battle spear, named "Golden Over Soul".Make the oversoul user stronger. Add bonus AS/MS based on your potency and endurance
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If Ren have higher endurance than potency , this skill will give 20% AS bonus
If Ren have higher potency than endurance , this skill will give 10% MS bonus
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1stskill (Active)


Golden Chuuka Zanmai

Stronger version of the Chuukan Zanmai. Originally used by Bason, by using the Hyoi Gattai with Bason, Ren eventually memorized it himself. It consists of a series of fast thrust attacks with the Guan Dao . Deals random damage .
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Level 1 - deals damage between 300 - 400
Level 2 - deals damage between 400 - 700
Level 3 - deals damage between 700 - 900
Level 4 - deals damage between 900 - 1100
Level 5 - deals damage between 1100 - 1500
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Cooldown : 20 second
Type Skill : Area
Type damage : magic
AoE : 350

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2nd skill(Active)


Exploding Oversoul

Turning the tip of spear the other way around Ren releases a large amount of Furyoku into an explosion propelling himself forward and using the arrow like tip of the other end to attack.Deals damage alongside his path .If Ren hit an enemy hero , it will do collision damage and Disarm/Slow enemy(Based on Ren’s stats) .
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Level 1 - 550 damage /350 collision damage, disarm/slow enemy hero for 2 second.
Level 2 - 750 damage /550 collision damage, disarm/slow enemy hero for 2,5 second.
Level 3 - 950 damage /750 collision damage, disarm/slow enemy hero for for 3 second.
Level 4 - 1100 damage /950 collision damage, disarm /slow enemy hero for for 3,5 second .
Level 5 - 1500 damage /1100 collision damage, disarm/slow enemy hero for for 3,5 second.
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Cooldown : 45 seconds
Skill Type : Single target
Type damage : Physical
Cast range : 650

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3rd skill(Passive)

Bason

Bason is Ren’s guardian ghost . Even in his oversoul form , Bason can protect Ren from external harm by warn him about income attack .Give Ren magic immunity for a short period.
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Level 1 - 3 second magic immunity , 23 second cooldown .
Level 2 - 3 second magic immunity , 20 second cooldown.
Level 3 - 3 second magic immunity , 18 second cooldown.
Level 4 - 3 second magic immunity , 16 second cooldown.
Level 5 - 3 second magic immunity , 13 second cooldown.
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Skill Type: Buff

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Ultimate (Active)


Bason , Big oversoul mode

As Ren charges more Furyoku into the O.S., Bason's body begins to materialize on a higher plane of existence, ultimately materializing his whole upper body, though in colossal proportion. At this phase, Bason O.S. can assist with the halberd's attacks using his fists.Give Ren bonus Hp/Damage based on his stats and cannot be slowed.
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Level 1 - Increases Ren’s Max hp/Damage by 20% and 15% bonus AS/MS.
Level 2 - Increases Ren’s Max hp/Damage by 25% and 20% bonus AS/MS.
Level 3 - Increases Ren’s Max hp/Damage by 35% and 20% bonus AS/MS.
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Cooldown : 120/110/100 seconds.
Duration : 15 second
Skill Type: Buff

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Big oversoul Skill(Passive)

Golden Punch

Materializing Bason's arms, Ren can use his oversoul to slam ground with a devastating attack.
Give Tao Ren 20% chance when attack to deal his base damage in an AoE and slow enemy for 2 second.

45% slow MS.
AoE : 250 around user.
Type damage : physical.

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Big oversoul Skill (Active)


Double Golden Sledgehammer

With this technique Ren's uses both fists of his oversouled Bason. Gathering both fists together, Bason slams them down on an opponent.
Deals an AoE damage and stun
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Deals (Ren’s current level)*150 and stun the affected unit for 1 second .
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Cooldown : 60
Skill Type : Area .
Type damage : universal.
AoE : 750 around user.

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Please review it , i will be happy to receive it
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Tidy up the suggestion. It's so messed up that it's making it hard to read.

Will be remake skillset soon .
thx for the review , I appreciate it

Thanks for the review .
I have change it a little so please review it.

Changelog :
-Ren already oversoul mode from the beginning now
-Change background story.
-Change base stats and stats grow.
-Change all skillset's effect.
-Add new skill :Bason


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AS buff too pathetic.
1st skill's damage at level 1 is too much. Most heroes at level 1 would have around 1k HP or less, and it deals at least half of that?
2nd skill's damage is gay.
Didn't look at effects, damage too big to care about that.

Yoosh sir! I will change it right now
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Already changed , so please take a look
Changelog
Default : increase AS bonus from 10% to 20 %
Nerfed 1st and 2nd skill damage

Anyway , thanks for your review
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