[KHR] Sawada Tsunayoshi

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Sawada Tsunayoshi
The 10th vongola boss

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Attack Type:Melee

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BaseAttackTime:1.4

Descrption:
Sawada Tsunayoshi (Tsuna for shot) is the protagonist of Katekyo Hitman Reborn. Tsuna is a junior-high student known in school as No Good Tsuna for his poor grades, wimpy attitude, bad luck, and lack of athleticism, a fact which Tsuna freely admits. His life was practically that of a normal student until he encounters his hitman-tutor, Reborn, who reveals to him that he has been selected as a candidate for the 10th boss of the mafia family, the Vongola.

Version 1 (Normal)

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Version 2 (Gravity Powers)

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Latest Char Pic:

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PS:the first skill is actualy used by Enma Kozato however Tsuna has gained the powers of Enma so tsuna should
also be able to use the move since he has been seen to manipulate gravity

LINK FOR MODEL:
http://chaosrealm.info/topic/7785206/1/


Changelog:

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Changelog V1.1:
*Changed default skill description to show na'tsu's attack
*changed skill 1's duration to 5 sec
*added aoe for ultimate
*added a aoe to skill 3 and added image
Changelog V1.2:
*Added mana system to Na'tsu
*reduced aoe for ultimate and reduced dmg
*reduced burning axel aoe dmg and reduced aoe and knockback range
*changed aoe freezing to aoe slow and reduced aoe, added breakable ice effect
*reduced cloak spell res and armour, increased cd, added not stackaable with items
Changelog V1.3:
*Changed/shortend all the description
*Changed burning axel effect
*Reduced ulti damage and changes mana system
*Reduced cloak spell res 10/20/30/40/50 to 5/10/15/20/25
*Reduced Zero Point Breakthrough Damage and reduced the amount
of damage needed to break the ice
Changelog V1.4:
*added mana penalty for death
*added cast range to BurningAxel
*added cast range to zero point breakthrough
Changelog V1.5
*increased burning axel ms and collision size, also made its aoe constant
*Made zero point breakthrough resistant to lousies dispell
*added range and aoe in a line to ultimate
Changelog V1.6
*added counter effect to Primos cloak and removed bonus armour
*changed mechanics of Burning axel
*Added aoe effect for zero point breakthrough
Changelog V1.7
*Changed Primos cloak effect to a mana shield
*added immolation effect to ultimate
Changelog V1.8
*Changed/Shortened descriptions
*Added lastest character picture
*Added picture for default and skill 2
Changelog V1.9
*added a spell damage cut for zero point breakthrough
Changelog V2.0
*Added a new version (2) in which i have changed the
default, skill 1 and skill 2
Changelog V2.1
*made skill 1's DPS and Orbs constant
*made skill 2's damage upon impact and not DPS
*added rotation speed on G.D.T for skill 2
Changelog V2.2
*Changed scale for default
*added more info on G.D.T
Changelog V2.3
*Sorted out descriptions of V2
*Changed the ultimate


summon na'tsu......

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freedomzx wrote:summon na'tsu......

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lol....

The10th-X wrote:

freedomzx wrote:summon na'tsu......

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LOL

lol....

What the fuck is this spam?.
Btw did I mention my hatred for every male character and my love for Aria?

Aria.OwNs wrote:
What the fuck is this spam?.
Btw did I mention my hatred for every male character and my love for Aria?

Yes aria.... we ALL know that.. lol..

Summon Na'tsu:
-Na'tsu has 100 dmg, has half base AS (the one without item bonuses) and
the same MS as tsuna na'tsu only attacks opponents is tsuna is
attacking them
-No cd, cannot summon more than 1 na'tsu, he lasts until tsuna dies (na'tsu is invincible and untouchable)
2 mana regen/s, 100 max mana, 30% mana loss when tsuna/natsu dies)

-Na'tsu's BAT?.
-What if Tsuna does not attack?.
-Does it trigger Alastor? (0 cd).
-100 max mana, 1 mana/sec, 100% mana lost when dead.
-Maybe you should add Duration and Cooldown. E.G. Lasts 12s, CD 16s.

Mantello di Vongola Primo(active)
Level 1:Reduces spell dmg by 25% and gives +10 armour

-You might add some effect, Spell reduction and armor is overused.
-What if Reduces Spell DMG by X%, Grants X armor and Deflects Missiles (e.g. Normal Ranged attacks, (If they are missiles, you cannot deflect a beam), Ranged Missile-Based Spells...., deflecting them into a random location/Where Tsuna is facing/Where Natsu is facing).

Burning Axel(Active,AOE)
Level 5:Deals 1500 damage
-Requires Na'tsu summon

-Another plain skill-cast-and-forget again.
-Add some effect in it. (Don't use DPS, its overused)
-Funny, Na'tsu has no time limit, and no CD <.<.

Zero point breakthrough 1st edition (active) (single Target):
Freezes a target for ? seconds, The ice will shatter if hit by a
spell of (500*level of ability) dmg or higher, If ice is shatterd the
player frozen is dealt (150*Level of ability) in damage

-What will happen if Nanoha's DB hits the target?, Instant dmg is lower than 500, but overall dmg is almost 1k at lvl 1.
-I just saw the image below, and it seems to hit in AoE, maybe you can do something about it.

XX Burner (Active):
Charges for 3 sec
Level 3:1250 dmg per second charged Deals 130% dmg when natsu has full mana
-Tsuna cannot move for 2 seconds after this spell

-3750 DMG + 1125 DMG if charged.
-Another Plain Skill-Charge-Cast-Forget.
-If you want this skill to be like this, Then 120s CD is too high for low DMG and no debuff/buff.
-Oh maybe you could give to Natsu or Tsuna an Inmolation X DPS while charging, dispelled after X secs after skill is casted.

ok
-Natsu has half of tsunas as all the time so he wouldnt have a BAT?
-he just stands still following tsuna, it says that (from what i see =/)
-nope, added
-added
-iv been told not to have a cd by sui due to the fact i cannot summon more than 1, maybe it should be a passive?

-changed effect
-same as above

-doesent every char have one?
-anyway added a effect
-maybe it should be passive like i said above what do u think?

-then it wont break
-added a aoe slow since iv been told b4 that an aoe freeze is imba

-as for the last question ill think about how to change it as the day goes

Wrong, Natsu's will be the same as Tsuna's BAT.
E.G. If Tsuna's BAT is 1,5 (1 hit every 1,5secs), then Natsu's BAT will be 1,5, just that Natsu's AS will be decreased by 50%, something like BATx2.
But instead of Scaling 3 BAT to 1,5 BAT, better set to both of them same BAT, decreasing AS by 50% in Natsu.

Yup but, a skill with an effect is better than a plain one, In my opinion.
Natsu passive is boring, you have to choose when to summon it.

The idea I had in mind is, add an Inmolation (300 AoE), around the Huge FireBall you gonna release (not around Natsu nor Tsuna), this way, the enemies that stay close to you will take DPS, forcing them to move.
My idea is, Inmolation lasts 3s (While charging) plus the travelling time, dealing X% Max HP/second. Up to you.

BaseAttackTime:1.2

-1,4 MINIMUM, 1,35 is reserved for my Lolies.

Descrption:

-Change it to Background Story, and fix some typos. (tsunayoshi is a name)

-Na'tsu has 100 dmg, has half base AS (the one without item bonuses) and
the same MS as tsuna na'tsu only attacks opponents is tsuna is
attacking them

-Na'tsu's deals 100 DMG. Its AS are half than Natsu's, while MS still the same.
-Na'tsu only attacks enemies already being attacked by Tsuna.

-No cd, cannot summon more than 1 na'tsu, he lasts until tsuna dies (na'tsu is invincible and untouchable)

-No CD. Cannot summon more than 1 Na'tsu and lasts till Tsuna dies.
-Na'tsu cannot be clicked nor killed.

-Na'tsu cannot be selected and just follows tsuna

-Already written above.

-Allows the use of Skill 1+skill 2

-Enables 1st and 2nd skills.

-Na'tsu has a mana system which works with tsunas ulti (3 mana regen/s, 100 max mana, 100% mana loss when tsuna/natsu dies)

-Na'tsu's mana is 100. Regenerates 3 mana/second. Reborns with 0 mana if killed.

Mantello di Vongola Primo(active)
When used Tsuna covers himself with the cloak and gains spell resistance, also a mana shield
in which absorbs 50% the damage then deflects the damage absorbed in 500 aoe and consumes Na'tsu's Mana

-Tsuna gains spell resistance.
-Half of incoming DMG goes to mana. Uses mana points.
-Deflects DMG within 500 AoE.

Burning Axel(Active,AOE)
Tsuna dashes behind his opponent, then he punches them giving them the knock-back effect
with a fireball, the hero knocked back travels 600 dist with the fireball dealing ? dmg/100 dist
before it explodes dealing dmg to the target and 50% dmg in aoe

-Tsuna dashes behind his opponent.
-Knocks target by 600 Range.
-Deals 50% DMG in AoE before exploding.

Zero point breakthrough 1st edition (active) (single Target):
Freezes a target for ? seconds, The ice will shatter if hit by a
spell of (500*level of ability) dmg or higher, If ice is shatterd the
player frozen is dealt (150*Level of ability) in damage, will slow
people around the target in 400 AOE by 50% for 3 seconds and deals 50%
of the total damage to them (500 damage on level 5)

-Freezes the target.
-Ice will shatter if its hit by a 500*lvl Spell. Deals 150*Lvl.
-Slows 400 AoE by 50% for 3 seconds.
-Deals 50% DMG around the target.

-cannot be dispelled with louise's dispell

-Cannot be dispelled.
-You cannot know if there will be any hero with dispel, or any dispel item.

XX Burner (Active):
Tsuna puts both hands forward in a 'X' pose and sends soft flames coming out of
his thrusters on his suit and releses a devastating attack from both his hands forward
When Tsuna is charging he has an immolation effect around him in 300 aoe which deals
5% max hp/s while charging, after firing it the aoe turns to 600 and deals 3% max hp/s

-Skill can be charged up to 3 seconds, increasing its DMG.
-Tsuna gains 300 AoE DPS around him while charging. Deals 5% MAX HP/Second.

after firing it the aoe turns to 600 and deals 3% max hp/s

-More information about this.

-Fix what I wrote above, and remove unneeded information.
-Tooltips only should have the important and needed information, unneeded information MUST be removed.

K, Ty for helping me fix the descriptions , i made a few little changes to the descriptions u gave me, i think it should be fine now, also i added latest picture of Tsuna at the bottom (for model editing IF this gets accepted =P)
Ps:I just HAD to use that image =P
Edit:also added new pic of Na'tsu and added a pic of burning axel

o btw. tsuna learned a new move. i forgot wat it was called but its the xburner without him releasing blasts in opposite direction, rather he shoots both of his hands into one direction, sending him flying back but doing 2x the power >.<. Dunno if you even care but just spreadin the knowledge.

ya tsun, thats XX-Burner i already have that as his ulti

Summon Na'tsu:
-Na'tsu deals 100 DMG. He has half the AS as Tsuna, but the same MS.

-He has half Tsuna's AS.

-Na'tsu cannot be clicked nor can he be killed

-Na'tsu cannot be clicked nor killed.

-Enables the 1st and 2nd Skills

-Enables 1st and 2nd Skills.

Mantello di Vongola Primo(active)
-Requires Na'tsu to be summoned

-Requires Na'tsu / Requires Na'tsu already summoned.

Burning Axel(Active,AOE)
-Requires Na'tsu summon

-Requires Na'tsu / Requires Na'tsu already summoned.

Zero point breakthrough 1st edition (active) (single Target):
-Ice will shatter if its hit by a 500*lvl Spell. Deals 150*Lvl If Shatterd.

-Shattered / Shatters.

Level 5:Freezes the opponent for 4 seconds dealing 250 dmg/s

-Dealing 250 DPS. Screw the dmg/s shit.

XX Burner (Active):
-1000 Range in a line 300 aoe wide

-AoE is always wide.
-And can you use Caps? e.g. AoE / DMG / AS / MS... Only in needed words.

Damage Type should be written in Skill name as:
XX Burner [Active][Damage Type: Universal]
-Remove DMG type from tooltips, or wherever you wrote it.

-1000 Range in a line 300 aoe wide
-Damage type:Universal
-Tsuna cannot move for 2 seconds after this spell
-Max Charging=3 Seconds,immolation lasts for 2 seconds after firing

This part goes to Tooltips into the following form:
-Damage Type to the skill title.
-Tsuna is unable to move for 2 seconds once this spell is casted.
-Charging already written in tooltips, and why did you write 2 seconds if:

-After firing, the XX-Burner Deals 3% MAX HP/Second For 3 Seconds after the initial DMG

Done =D (i think)

aria y u being such a grammar whore. post spammer

I think the term is Grammar Nazi. And he's not one.

soooo anymore changes needed?

Change this guy into a female.
Chances to be implemented into ABC will be higher.

Aria.OwNs wrote:Change this guy into a female.
Chances to be implemented into ABC will be higher.

ya i know >_>
currently im working out the chance to get a guy in abc, im still seeing zeros
lemme tell you what iv got so far
0.0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
0...... *15 years later*0000000000000000000000000000000000000000
000000000000000000000000000... *realizes suggestion been put in rejected* aw shit

lol or you can just make him ichigo. ichigo is so cool. change his name to ichigo kurosaki.

Ichigo is so cool, right, because you love futa, and ichigo is a girl with ****

ichigo is so cool. best char ever. ur just jealous becuz ichigo doesnt love u.

added another effect to zero point breakthrough.. still trying to get him in =P i wont give up

Level 5:Freezes the opponent for 4 seconds dealing 250 DPS/Increases BAT by x2.5

-You cannot alter BAT.

aw =/ lol
edit:changed to a different effect

UPDATED WITH VERSION 2!
edit:added explanation pic for skill 1 and 2
tbh i like V2 more lol