[Kore wa Zombie desu ka?] Eucliwood Hellscythe

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Name : Eucliwood Hellscythe
Anime : Kore wa Zombie Desu Ka?

Background
Eucliwood, called Eu for short, is a necromancer who brought Ayumu back to life to be her guard and has been living with him since. Her magic is so powerful that she has to wear heavy armor and suppress her emotions in order to control it. Her words also carry strong magic, so she avoids talking and instead communicates through written notes. She experiences severe pain whenever her magic is activated, and she claims that even if she were to die her magic would continue uncontrolled. She does not like people talking about death or telling them to go die since, as she takes on the pain of anyone she heals, revives or kills, she understands the pain of dying despite being immortal herself.

STATUS
*Max Health*
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*Atk Speed*
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*Base Damage*
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*Defense*
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*Movement Speed*
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STATS GROWTH
*Max Health*
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*Base Damage*
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*Defense*
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Attack Range : 125(Melee)

ABILITIES

Default Skill

String of Fate[Passive]

''The string of fate wiggles along. A strong magical presence will cause it to wiggle more violently. Disturbances and uncertainties cause my magic to lose control. It affects the string of fate and changes reality. That is why I must not express emotions.
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Gives 8% Magic Reduction to self and -8% Magic Reduction Aura that affects enemies.
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Detailed Information:
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Magic Reduction stacks with Aegis
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SKILLS

Healing[Damage Type: Magic][Active]

She is able to heal wounds of other people. It seems there is no limit to the size/depth of the wounds she can heal - however, when she heals someone, she takes on all the pain of the wound that they had before she healed it, so it's not a skill that she uses often.
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Fully heals an ally at the cost of percentage of the HP healed and gives Eucliwood more regeneration
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Level 1 - 50% cost of HP healed or 80% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 5 HP/s Regeneration
Level 2 - 45% cost of HP healed or 75% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 10 HP/s Regeneration
Level 3 - 40% cost of HP healed or 70% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 15 HP/s Regeneration
Level 4 - 35% cost of HP healed or 65% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 20 HP/s Regeneration
Level 5 - 30% cost of HP healed or 60% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 25 HP/s Regeneration
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Cooldown : 40 seconds

Detailed Information:
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This skill has 2 cases
1st case - Fully healing the ally % of the cost of the HP healed(as stated above)
2nd case - If the HP cost is too much for your current HP(which means you will die if you use it), the HP cost basis turns into the user's current HP
Casting Range : 200
Cannot cast if HP is below 30%
Has a 0.5 casting time
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Shield[Damage Type: Magic][Passive]

She is able to create an invisible barrier around her which can deflect/diffuse just about any attack or projectile. She can cast this barrier without moving or saying a word, but sometimes she chooses to move a hand in the direction of the projectile to block it.
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Everytime Eucliwood takes incoming damage from an enemy hero, she diffuses it rendering the attack/skill useless and deflects it to the hero who targeted Eucliwood.
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Level 1 - 3% chance to diffuse and deflect
Level 2 - 6% chance to diffuse and deflect
Level 3 - 9% chance to diffuse and deflect
Level 4 - 12% chance to diffuse and deflect
Level 5 - 15% chance to diffuse and deflect
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Detailed Information:
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Shield will only damage the hero who inflicted it. Meaning, even if the enemy is far away(e.g. BRC to Eucliwood from far away), Shield will also activate
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Masou Shoujo Form[Active]

She is able to use Haruna's chainsaw/the incantation to gain "Masou Shoujo" magical powers. This seems to be just an upgrade strength wise and possibly the ability to float/hover/fly for her.
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Gives her a cute dress and acquires Mystletainn and the ability to fly which has no collision.
Gives her a 100% cleaving attack.
Gives extra points to all stats
Gives her another skill "Mystletainn Kick" which can only be used once every time Masou Shoujo Form is activated
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Mystletainn Kick[Active]

Eucliwood jumps to the single target, dealing damage and slowing enemies around her
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Level 1 - MSF : +5 MS, lasts 10 seconds. MK : deals 200 damage, 15% MS and AS slow around 200 AOE, +1 to all stats
Level 2 - MSF : +10 MS, lasts 12.5 seconds. MK : deals 450 damage, 25% MS and AS slow around 250 AOE, +2 to all stats
Level 3 - MSF : +15 MS, lasts 15 seconds. MK : deals 700 damage, 35% MS and AS slow around 300 AOE, +3 to all stats
Level 4 - MSF : +20 MS, lasts 17.5 seconds. MK : deals 950 damage, 45% MS and AS slow around 350 AOE, +4 to all stats
Level 5 - MSF : +25 MS, lasts 20 seconds. MK : deals 1200 damage, 55% MS and AS slow around 400 AOE, +5 to all stats
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Cooldown : 30 seconds

Detailed Information:
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MSF AOE Cleave = 250
MK slow lasts for 2 seconds
MK Cast Range : 600
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Ultimate

Death Affliction[Universal Type][Active]

By saying the word "die", Eucliwood is able to instantly kill a person. In Kyouko's case, she was able to deplete the lives acquired by the rogue Masou Shoujo, whose ability allows acquiring more than one life. However, using her powers in this way, she experiences a intense pain in her head.
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Eucliwood says "Die" that affects all enemy units around her that will tear their life force apart and sometimes killing them completely, and stunning them but it has a price to pay for using such strong magic.
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Level 1 - 1 second stun, 3% chance to instantly kill the nearest enemy hero, 60% Current HP cost
Level 2 - 1.5 second stun, 6.5% chance to instantly kill the nearest enemy hero, 50% Current HP cost
Level 3 - 2 second stun, 10% chance to instantly kill the nearest enemy hero, 40% Current HP cost
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Cooldown : 120/110/100 seconds

Detailed Information:
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Cannot cast all skills(Passive skills are also nullified) for 1 second after casting
Deals 50% targets' current HP at 500 AOE and chance to instant kill is doubled if enemies are within 250 AOE and tripled if within 125 AOE
Cannot cast if user's HP is below 10%
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Masou Shoujo Form

Spoiler:

If approved, I really like Eucliwood Hellscythe's model to have a Scythe

Spoiler:

Hope to see Eucliwood in the game. Don't care if you entirely change the skills. Just really wanted to see her in the game so bad. You can make your own skillset for her if you have too :D :D :D :D


Changelog
-String of Fate is now active with few modifications
-Reworked Healing
-Reworked Shield
-Reworked Masou Shoujo Form
-Necromancy changed to Death Affliction
-Read the skills again for more info

Changelog 2
-String of Fate is now passive with few modifications
-Reworked again Shield
-Additional effects for Masou Shoujo Form
-Death Affliction now only affects enemies

OmegaSui wrote:
Ultimate
_Death Affliction :

• There's no damage type pure.
  
• % to instagib (up to 10%) is boring. It requires not skills of the player, but luck. Which is boring.
  

lawl, thats better than following the anime that gives a pure 100% death rate
Though seriously i prefer a 80% instagib with 100-200 aoe. Since everytime when she says "Die", she is at least quite close to the enemy.

Aria wats more original than 1 hit K.O technique. Yuu = Deathnote.

Finished editing. Please make more comments and suggestions

(Melee)

-Range 100 or 128?.
-Btw Background Story too long.
-No stats Growth?.

String of Fate(Active)
Instances lasts 30 seconds or until used
Cooldown - 50 seconds

-Don't ask for a review if you DON'T fix what I told you.
-Give information about INSTANCES.
-5 Instances? 15?, maybe 68?.
-If instances are used quickly, you gonna stay 45s without instances?.
-Reduce its duration aswell as its cooldown. E.G. 15/20.

Healing
Fully heals an ally at the cost of % of the HP healed
If the HP cost is more than Eucliwood's Current HP, HP cost becomes % of Current HP
Cannot cast to self
Enhanced Regeneration for Eucliwood
Casting Range : 200
Heal is Magic Type
*Healing's
percentage healed is equal to target's Max HP, not yours so the damage
you take will also be according to the target's Max HP's percentage
Cannot cast if HP is below 30%
Level 1 - 50% of HP healed, 80% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 5 HP/s Enhanced Regeneration
Level 5 - 30% of HP healed, 60% Current HP cost if HP is more than the required amount, 25 HP/s Enhanced Regeneration

-Remove unneeded information from Tooltips -> Lines 2, 6, 7 and 8.
-So HP healed amount is HIGHER at lvl 1 than lvl 5?.
-What's the point, you heal 30%, and you lose 60% HP?.

Shield
Creates a Shield that stores and deflects all incoming damage except her
self damaging skills and deflects it at activation. Passively gives
damage reduction(skills having HP cost does not reduce) when stored
damage is not yet full
Damage deals 50% of the stored damage
Stored damage is gone if Eucliwood dies
Damage is Magic type
Level 5 - Stores a maximum of 3000 damage, 25% damage reduction

-Make the tooltips shorter.
-Write the Damage Type in skill name, not tooltips. Shield [Active][Damage Type: Spell] (Do this aswell in the other skills).
-Passively 25% Damage reduction is HAXX. Nerf.
-How to release the stored damage?.
-Shield Duration?. If not duration then Im gonna cast a Shield every 25s, when I have 10 shields Ill release them to instangib enemies.

Masou Shoujo Form
Gives her a cute dress and acquires Mystletainn and the ability to fly which has no collision.

-This is the first time I see a Lolie flying without extra MS.
-MK CD?.

Death Affliction
Eucliwood says "Die" that affects all units in 500 AOE around her that
will tear their life force apart and sometimes killing them completely,
and stunning them but it has a price to pay for using such strong magic.
Silences Eucliwood for 1 second after casting
Damage depends on the life of the targets and is Universal Type
Deals 50% Current HP
Cannot cast if user's HP is below 10%
Deals 10% Max HP to allied heroes(Can Deny) and has no stun to allies
Cooldown : 100/110/120 seconds

-FFFF HAXXOR TOOLTIP.
-Remove unneeded information in it, I won't tell you the lines.
-I thought I told you, ''Ultimate CD should decrease every level, not increase'', seems you don't care about what I say.

First, You really don't need to follow what exactly it says. It's just a suggestion. And if this gets approved, I know thomasinow and the others will just remove unnecessary tooltips
For stats growth, what do u want it to be?

Instances

Yes, if you used up the instances, you will have to wait until it will CD


Healing

It has 2 cases
1st case - When your HP is high enough to cast Healing via Max HP
2nd case - When your HP is insufficient to cast Healing via Max HP

and it means, 50% Max HP cost of HP healed(1st case) or 80% current HP cost(2nd case)

Shield

Automatically stores damage once the skill is learned. Stored damage is released when you actually clicked the skill. So there

Masou Shoujo Form

MK has no CD because it is already gone once you use the skill. Just edited and put additional MS

Death Affliction

Ok. Sorry about that. No need to be cranky about it. Srsly, what does Haxxor Tooltip mean. I don't that kind of terms

25% damage reduction xD awesome. Wtf is saiyan armor.

What do you think? Is 25% damage reduction until 3000 damage is stored too IMBA? Or should I lessen it?

wait... the 25% damage reduction only until its stored? >.>. I just herped my derp. My bad.

the others will just remove unnecessary tooltips

Which is me.