[Touhou Project] Shameimaru Aya

This is my first suggestion, so I am 105% sure that his will be full of mistakes. I don't even know how to color the words so I'm going to mark them more brightly. ONWARDS TO THE FAILURE OF A SUGGESTION!





Name: Shameimaru Aya
Affiliation: Bunbunmaru News Reporter
Anime: Touhou Project

Background Story

Shameimaru Aya, a crow tengu, is one of the reporters of Youkai Mountain, and is known quite widely among the land. She publishes her own newspaper, The Bunbunmaru News. She cheerily does her job and is tenacious in meddling with everyone for news. She has a shameless reporting style, tends to exaggerate events, and expresses her own personal opinions in her articles. As a result so other characters find her to be a nuisance and many avoid being in her newspaper. Her fighting skill however, is not something to underestimate, as her job makes her a great ‘grazer’ of projectiles, and her tengu blood gives her superior speed. Her unique camera allows her to absorb certain projectiles and even defy logic.

Stats

Endurance
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Swiftness
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Potency
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Resistance
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Speed
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Attack Type:Melee

Stats Growth:
Max Health
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Base Damage
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Attack Speed
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BaseAttackTime:1.5


Skills

Domination Dash - Active - Target Self
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Aya calls upon the wind and grants herself increased speed. Aya has 75% increased move speed and has 30% chance to evade attack for 3 seconds
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Cooldown - 25 seconds
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First Skill - Photo Flash [Target - Enemies] [Damage Type - Enhanced]

Aya’s camera allows her to absorb almost any sort of projectile and at the same time takes a picture. She uses this camera whenever she takes pictures of spellcards, for articles, and sometimes when on brawls with enemies. With Aya’s speed, it is unknown when or where she might take an embarrassing picture of anyone vulnerable.
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Target AOE is 450. Enemies targeted are damaged and stunned from the flash. Due to her camera's energy absorbing qualities, she weakens enemies for a short moment. Casting Range is 450
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Level 1 – Provides 300 damage. Stuns enemies for 0.1 second and lowers enemy damage by 5% for 4 seconds
Level 2 – Provides 450 damage. Stuns enemies for 0.2 second and lowers enemy damage by 10% for 4 seconds
Level 3 – Provides 600 damage. Stuns enemies for 0.3 second and lowers enemy damage by 15% for 4 seconds
Level 4 – Provides 750 damage. Stuns enemies for 0.4 second and lowers enemy damage by 20% for 4 seconds
Level 5 – Provides 900 damage. Stuns enemies for 0.5 second and lowers enemy damage by 25% for 4 seconds

Cooldown Time – 25 seconds

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Second Skill - Pelting in the Night - Passive

Aya can call upon a flock of crows to support herself in battle. While attacking the enemy, there is a chance that a flock of crows would appear out of nowhere and attack the target. The flock can deal a good amount of damage but lasts very shortly and they scatter when attacked. This is the reason why Aya barely uses her allies. If the flock loses all their hp they scatter/die.

Flock deals 100 damage per second and has 20% chance to be summoned while Aya is attacking

Level 1 - Flock has 300 hp and if not killed lasts for 3 seconds.
Level 2 - Flock has 600 hp and if not killed lasts for 6 seconds.
Level 3 - Flock has 900 hp and if not killed lasts for 9 seconds.
Level 4 - Flock has 1200 hp and if not killed lasts for 12 seconds.
Level 5 - Flock has 1500 hp and if not killed lasts for 15 seconds.
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Third Skill - Gust "Suratahiko's enemy - [Target Anything, enemy] [Damage Type - Enhanced]

Aya performs a high-velocity dash shrouded by wind. Using the winds to achieve maximum acceleration, she can charge at the enemy with high force and damage. Range of this attack is 450 and Aya moves at 380 speed during the attack.

Level 1 - Deals 350 damage on a path. Stuns enemies for 0.5 second
Level 2 - Deals 550 damage on a path. Stuns enemies for 1 second
Level 3 - Deals 750 damage on a path. Stuns enemies for 1.5 second
Level 4 - Deals 950 damage on a path. Stuns enemies for 2 seconds
Level 5 - Deals 1150 damage on a path. Stuns enemies for 2.5 seconds
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Cooldown Time – 24
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Ultimate - Illusionary Dominance - Target Enemy - Damage Piercing
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This was one of Aya's much stronger abilities. She can manipulate the winds to greatly boost her speed and repeatedly attack a target. Once a target was attacked, they would be trapped. She repeatedly dashes past the target (at around 450 diameter :Don't know how to explain this:)and damages them (Total of 12 dashes). The main target always receives 50 more damage for each dash from Aya. Aya is invulnerable while using this ability. Each dash takes 0.25 sec

Level 1 - Each dash deals 100 damage to any enemy that she dashes past.
Level 2 - Each dash deals 250 damage to any enemy that she dashes past.
Level 3 - Each dash deals 400 damage to any enemy that she dashes past.
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Cooldown Time – 130/120/110

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Failure ends here, any suggestions? Please?

Edit 1 - I edited the 1st, default and 3rd skill and added in some colors. Can't believe I didn't see where it was. Also planed to change 2nd skill sometime.

Edit 2 - I can't seem to find the latest of the status.

Edit 3 - I fixed the status and a few of the abilities. Anything else wrong and needs to be changed?

Movement Speed 400 MS

-Too much MS.

Casting Animation – 2 s

-2 seconds everytime you want to cast a spell?

Default Skill – Activate Wings
Cooldown: 50

-Too much CD.

First Skill – Photo Flash
Cooldown Time – 60/55/50/45/40

-I suggest more slow and less duration.
-Too much CD.

Third Skill – Gale Fan
Cooldown Time – 60/54/48/42/36

-Too much CD.

Not bad for a first suggestion.
But you should use color, my eyes hurt.

Second skill:

Level 2

Whaddya mean by per moving? Did you mean per distance traveled? Like 3hp/s per 100 distance traveled?

Other comment: CD is too much

Personal comment: I'd prefer you use Aya's spell cards as skills in this hero suggestion rather than some random skills she has. But, it's up to you. I just like it that way

I still can't find a way to properly quote without messing up but I did change all the skills. I added the colors and updated the stats. I knew I was going to mess up at first.

But maybe this updated version is a lot better?

Still, CD is too much.

1st skill - try at least 18s constant CD? It's an OP skill to have 30s CD on lvl1
2nd skill - 25-30s CD for me. 11s CD is just way too OP
3rd skill - again, CD is too much.
Ultimate - if this so called "close by" is 400AOE, how about the area attack DPS? and 15-20-25% slow for a tornado is underpowered IMO.

Poor dude, you killing him.
Go on, I enjoy this.

OmegaSui wrote:Dear, you're being such a sadist.

i think both of you....

iincyo wrote:

OmegaSui wrote:Dear, you're being such a sadist.

i think both of you....

a tyrant and a sadist still has different meaning LOl

Can anyone point me to where the latest status template are? I can't seem to find it

I think I did the status now. Its 23 - 27 right?
I also fixed the cooldown of the skills.

There I edited the names.