[Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha] Fate Testarossa

So bored of waiting and I just thought of posting a random hero.


Fate is a very serious and strong-willed person. At first, she was rather cold to Nanoha, but starts to show her kind and protective side after realizing how much Nanoha has reached out to her. Learning of her own origins has led her to question herself, and at times wonder about her own worth, but after seeing Alicia in the Book Of Darkness, she has come to see herself as her own person.

Attack Range: Melee or 120 Range

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Default(Active): Blitz Action
is a spell Fate uses to increase movement speed dramatically (if temporarily), to the point where human eyes cannot track her.

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-Turn Fate MS and Evasion to max for 1.25 sec.
-MS is 1000
-Fate can pass through units but not on walls on this skill.
Cooldown: 30 sec.

Skill(Active): Thunder Blade
Thunder Blade is a "power-up version" of Fate Testarossa's Thunder Rage spell, wherein she focuses each attack into individual swords that can detonate on the command "Break!". Chrono Harlaown has a attack with similar visual effect called Stinger Blade Execution Shift.

lvl1- Deals 80 damage per each sword
lvl2- Deals 160 damage per each sword
lvl3- Deals 240 damage per each sword
lvl4- Deals 320 damage per each sword
lvl5- Deals 400 damage per each sword

-3 swords.
-300 AoE but the AoE gets bigger by 25 per sec.Automatic detonation after 5 sec each sword.
-the distance of each sword when casted is the same with Black Star 2nd Default.
-can be detonated by pressing the skill again.

Cooldown:15 sec

Skill(Active): Plasma Smasher
Plasma Smasher is a enhanced version of Thunder Smasher, after Bardiche is upgraded to Bardiche Assault Form. Unlike Thunder Smasher, it is usually cast from Fate's palm instead of from Bardiche.

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-Deals damage in a straight line.
-Hits 4 times.
-Has 1600 range.
-300 AoE.


lvl1-200 initial damage, then 50 damage/hit.
lvl2- 400 initial damage, then 100 damage/hit.
lvl3 - 600 initial damage, then 150 damage/hit.
lvl4 - 700 initial damage, then 200 damage/hit.
lvl5 - 1000 initial damage, then 250 damage/hit.

Cooldown: 20/20/18/18/16 seconds

Skill(Active): Bardiche Zanber Form
Bardiche's blade splits in two and a spike emerges from the top of the head, forming a trident shape which becomes the hilt of an enormous energy sword. This form can use Jet Zanber, Sprite Zanber and Plasma Zanber Smasher.

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-increase Fate MS and AS by 60%
-change Plasma Smasher to Plasma Zanber Breaker

Plasma Zanber Breaker is a more powerful bombardment cast under Bardiche's Zanber Form, unleashing a powerful energy blast.

lvl1-400 initial damage, then 200 damage/hit.
lvl2- 600 initial damage, then 225 damage/hit.
lvl3 - 800 initial damage, then 250 damage/hit.
lvl4 - 1000 initial damage, then 275 damage/hit.
lvl5 - 1200 initial damage, then 300 damage/hit.

lvl1-last for 15 sec.
lvl2-last for 20 sec.
lvl3-last for 25 sec.
lvl4-last for 30 sec.
lvl5-last for 35 sec.

Cooldown:30/40/50/60/70 sec.

Ultimate(Active):Jet Zanber
First a shockwave is thrown, then Bardiche is swung at the target. The energy blade of the Zanber grows to many times its typical size, so Fate can slash through a target that would ordinarily be out of range.

-increase Fate attack range to 300

lvl1-deals 700 damage upon activation and increase Fate base damage by 20
lvl2-deals 1000 damage upon activation increase Fate base damage by 30
lvl3-deals 1500 damage upon activation increase Fate base damage by 40

-AoE of damage upon activation is 500.
-can only be activate when Bardiche Zanber Form is use.

Cooldown: 120 sec.

Ultimate(Active):Thunder Fall
A ceremonial spell that makes lighting to strikes on a target area. It is once use by Fate while she was searching for the jewel seeds.

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-Casting Range: 800
-AoE:600
-casting time: 2 sec.
-deals damage on area for 5 sec.
-reduce hit opponents MS by 60%/70%80%

lvl1-Deals 400 per second and slows opponent being hit by the skill.
lvl2-Deals 800 per second and slows opponent being hit by the skill.
lvl3-Deals 1200 per second and slows opponent being hit by the skill.

Cooldown: 100/90/80 sec.

Change log 1.0
-Changes Thunder Blade effect to the ff:
*Damage become 80,160,240,320,400 from 40,80,120,160,200
*Changes the sword from 6 to 3
*Added a detonating function
*Increase the AoE of Thunder Blade damage per sec.
*Added the distance of the swords when casted.
-Increase the base damage add of Jet Zanber from 15/25/35 to 20/30/40.

Changelog 1.1
-Changes the damage of Plasma Zanber Breaker
-Add +AS% on Bardiche Zanber Form
-Added Thunder Fall(new ulti).

Default(Active): Blitz Action
is a spell Fate uses to increase movement speed dramatically (if temporarily), to the point where human eyes cannot track her.

-Turn Fate MS and Evasion to max for 1.25 sec.

-Do you mean Max MS (522) or MS Like Nanoha's Flash Move?

Skill(Active): Plasma Smasher
lvl4 - 700 initial damage, then 200 damage/hit.

-I guess you wrote it wrong and you wanted it to be 800 DMG.

Ultimate(Active):Jet Zanber
First a shockwave is thrown, then Bardiche is swung at the target. The energy blade of the Zanber grows to many times its typical size, so Fate can slash through a target that would ordinarily be out of range.

-Is it AoE DMG then Buff is activated or?
-Does it last till Bardiche Zanber Form is gone?

I can answer you at the default and the ulti but not with Plasma Smasher since that I let it the same damage as Nanoha's Divine Buster.

ok at the default, the same speed with Nanoha's Flash Move but this skill wont let fate to go across the walls.

At the ulti, its the same system how Hollow Mask(Ichigo) works.Then it was buff first before damage.

Guess thats answer the question.

hmm loli fate.. i dont know we are going add the lolis version again or not

but for sure im going add fate soon..

Weeeeee neeeeeedddd mooooorrrreee llllloooolllliiiiieeeesss!
And turn ABC into Loli Battle Characters.

Err dood, next time please use quote if its not yours.

Default skill : 1.25 s at 522 ms and 100% evasion -> move at most 652 range. Why not use a specific number via trigger, 800~1000 MS ?

1st skill : nothing much to say, though there can be a little altering that could make this skill less boring as a nuke. I see detonation. I see swords. I see lesser dmg dealing swords that holds its victims for WTF seconds and after that explode. Or give the command to Fate either if she wants it to explode or not.

2nd skill : nothing much to say either, it's like Nanoha's clone skill. It has freaking huge amount of lights and all, blind effect ? Or would you prefer holy shjt knockback due to the spell's superior? (lesser dmg ofc)

3rd skill : Same as above for the upgrade.

Ultimate : roflcopter.

hahaha let see

@ToM so I guess that I can also post the old version of fate here if I felt like doing it.

@sui

about the default, I think that Ill go with 900 MS.

first skill, I can make it a detonate skill by pressing the skill again(like Akiha's second skill) but I think that I have to put a damage per second effect per swords on the target for this one.

at the second skill, staying with blind effect cause knockback seems not a good idea for me.

at the third skill, that is originally the same idea of bankai and sailor form combination and my boredom made it possible to mix both into one but not with the same effect.

about the ulti, Im not sure if that is good but I guess its fine.

try to be a bit logical dood, haxxor swords from nowhere causing DPS? They're more fitting to block the way or whatsoever.

Pictures explain better, don't you think so :D

I dont have plan on putting pic of skill at the suggestion page itself since that it is not my style on doing that.

Then again if DPS wont do, Ill just make the explosion AoE larger with a greater damage or either of the said effect.

updated the suggestion.

updated the suggestion.

30 stats bars? Omg you mad.

Default(Active): Blitz Action
is a spell Fate uses to increase movement speed dramatically (if temporarily), to the point where human eyes cannot track her.

-No more Nanoha copies please.

Skill(Active): Thunder Blade

-As above, no more copies.

Skill(Active): Plasma Smasher

-Copy ftw

Skill(Active): Bardiche Zanber Form
-increase Fate MS and AS by 60%

-Overused AS and MS concept.

Ultimate(Active):Thunder Fall
-deals damage on area for 5 sec.
-reduce hit opponents MS by 60%/70%80%
lvl3-Deals 1200 per second and slows opponent being hit by the skill

-You trolling US? 6k DMG +80% MS SLOW LOL.

Wtf do u expect from another super overpowered loli with absolute no new concept?

copy skills eh. Thunder Blade is a copy skill? AoE getting bigger per sec. is a copy skill? from whom?

default...not like that its a total copy of skill.Well at least I has plan to change it duration since that it is too short for its evasion stats.

hmmm might as well change that 2nd skill soon.

yeah I know overuse concept and I only bump on this thread since that I dont want to see this suggestion on the declined soon.

oh about the trolling part. Obvious reason, that is only to attract reviewers attention and have you guys suggest a better idea.

Honestly, don't bump useless topics UNLESS, I'll repeat, UNLESS you have a GOOD SUGGESTION for it or SOMETHING NEW TO ADD.
Bumping a topic to add a trolling skill and 4 copies....
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