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Post by Leaderofrouge 10/10/2010, 5:46 am

First topic message reminder :

The best way to do this is to copy out the original description/text --- either find it from the character information section or the game (screenshots would be a good idea) --- highlight the part of the text that contains the error(s) then write your suggestion in a separate paragraph. This way ToM/other authors know exactly where to look & change. So I will start this off as an example:

Description Improvement - Any Description-Related Feedback Here - Page 4 Abc10

Also in the description:
"Yuuji slash the sword with his Power of Existence. Make an energy wave is appear on top of his sword.
Deals 225 damage each slash hitted
"

My Suggestion:
Using his Power of Existence, Yuuji can generate energy waves when he swings his sword.
Deals 225 damage each wave.
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Post by OmegaSui 6/19/2012, 9:23 pm

Doubt there's any grammar error left except for male and items' descs.
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Post by IloveTsundere 6/22/2012, 4:57 pm

Needs. Less. Wiki. MANG.
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