[Hidan No Aria] Kanzaki H. Aria

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• Click on my ABC userbar and see if you can alter anything.
  

• Too bad this skill seems to be a must, i'd rather a metamorph skill to change into melee/ranged mode so it won't be the same as Shana's default.
  

• Can she do anything else while reloading? Or does she have to stay at one place like a sitting duck for 1.5s ?
  
• As the tooltips stated, she gains 12 mana on the first 0.75s ?
  
• Too much unneeded information in tooltips.
  
• Specific amount of bullets required of [put the name here] skills should be placed under that skill's tooltips (which is already done and idk why you are still keeping it). Too much text can kill.
  

• Name is used in T.K's 3rd skill.
  
• Chaos is attack type, not damage type. To make it simple , just [Chaos, Uknown]
  
• Specific heroes's damage negation in tooltips is not needed. If you want it to be un-negate-able, make it direct HP removal. Either way, i don't like a perfect shot to be actually perfect.
  
• The line's AoE ?
  

• That's not tooltips, but more like a detailed animation request.
  
•                                                             Space works for me?
  
• Total DoT is not needed. The duration for the debuff should be placed under the tooltips.
  
• Don't know about you but i'd prefer minor debuff but stacks with itself.
  

• That's maximum damage, not total, since total damage can be vary
  
• Unneeded information.
  
• ?% of her raw damage? With or without the item/stat's bonus damage?
  
• CD should be constant.
  

• Trolling is not an official term/word to be used in ABC. It's merely a slang.
  
• Again : That's not tooltips, but more like a detailed animation request.
  
• Immobilized -> Entangled. Done. Screw the blinks.
  
• Too much pros for Aria . Oh btw just put a magic/spell immune buff on her. Prob solved.
  

• ...never knew there were something called tactical shot.
  
• Are you referring to Weaver's 3rd skill ?
  
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Default skill
_Weapon Swap :

• Too bad
  this skill seems to be a must, i'd rather a metamorph skill to change
  into melee/ranged mode so it won't be the same as Shana's default.
  

_Reload :

• Can she do anything else while reloading? Or does she have to stay at one place like a sitting duck for 1.5s ?
  
• As the tooltips stated, she gains 12 mana on the first 0.75s ?
  
• Too much unneeded information in tooltips.
  
• Specific
  amount of bullets required of [put the name here] skills should be
  placed under that skill's tooltips (which is already done and idk why
  you are still keeping it). Too much text can kill.
  

1st skill
_Perfect Shot :

• Name is used in T.K's 3rd skill.
  
• Chaos is attack type, not damage type. To make it simple , just [Chaos, Uknown]
  
• Specific
  heroes's damage negation in tooltips is not needed. If you want it to
  be un-negate-able, make it direct HP removal. Either way, i don't like a
  perfect shot to be actually perfect.
  
• The line's AoE ?
  

_Double Slash:

• That's not tooltips, but more like a detailed animation request.
  
• Space works for me?
  
• Total DoT is not needed. The duration for the debuff should be placed under the tooltips.
  
• Don't know about you but i'd prefer minor debuff but stacks with itself.
  

2nd skill
_Scarlet Rain :

• That's maximum damage, not total, since total damage can be vary
  
• Unneeded information.
  
• ?% of her raw damage? With or without the item/stat's bonus damage?
  
• CD should be constant.
  

_Assault Maneuver :

• Trolling is not an official term/word to be used in ABC. It's merely a slang.
  
• Again : That's not tooltips, but more like a detailed animation request.
  
• Immobilized -> Entangled. Done. Screw the blinks.
  
• Too much pros for Aria . Oh btw just put a magic/spell immune buff on her. Prob solved.
  

3rd skill
_Tactical Shot:

• ...never knew there were something called tactical shot.
  
• Are you referring to Weaver's 3rd skill ?
  
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Well in the anime she doesn't transform so NO.

• Not transform, but change her from ranged -> melee or vice versa, just the same as the weapon swap but with duration ----> Haruhi doesn't transform nor create a Closed Dimension by herself. Be flexible. Papillion Heart was never an ability to be used, but it's cool right?
  

  -Information is not unneeded since without it Deckai will mess it 105% chance.

• Detailed information and tooltips must be seperated, and noted. WALL OF TEXT FFFFFFF--
  

  -I wrote [Chaos, Uknown]

• You wrote : Damage type : Chaos, Uknown
  

  -Well everybody who uses Aria MUST know how she/her skills work.

• And i thought Shiki's 2nd skill was target-point. They just need 1 try to know wtf is going on, too much texts won't help (...hello, Avenger's ulti). And that's a detailed animation request, which should not be involved with the tooltips.
  

  -If total DoT added it will help players, and DECKAI to understand it.

• Put it at Deckai-go-here-and-read-this-first section. Or just check out how do i do it with my Lina suggestion.
  

  -What do you mean with this? <.<

• Like 2%AS reduction per 0.1s up to 70%, 1%MS reduction per 0.1s up to 35%.
  

  -WTF is wrong with detailed description lol, information is NEEDED, not only DMG range and AoE (ehm wait, most skills don't have AoE and Range on description o.O), how skill works or how it WON'T work is needed also.

• Because most of the players are lazy asses with less time to think than to act. Would they choose to read that wall of text that wouldn't even fit the space for a skill's description/tooltips or they just use it with AI to test out first? Like i told u, put it at another section.
  

  -I don't think when you slash an enemy with a katana he gets ''entangled'', but inmobilized due to the wounds.

• I was merely talking about a ladder skill with the same function, never said that the name must be Entangled or anything.
  

  -Yes something like Weaver's passive, but it WON'T, I will say it again, WON'T be an orb effect, which means Nova, Gae Bolg and Hollow Mask will (or I hope, don't mess it DECKAI) work with 1st and 2nd Shot.

• Idk about that part of coding so i won't say anything regarding this matter anymore. B4 i shut my mouth, DotA IMBA tried to remove the orb effect part, but the orb effect and buff placer can only work on the original attack. The newest versions created a mirror of weaver on the other side and attacks at 400% IAS, same items, lasts for X attacks, so the shitty proc things worked. IDK how can the skill work on Aria, she can't call herself from the future to aid her.
  

• The term is Dual Shot i believe?
  
• Just AoE.
  
• Direct HP removal is a way of damaging, thus, replace Uknown with it.
  

• The looooong part which does not belong to the tooltips -> Aria moves forth and back, performing a double streak attack on the targeted unit. (RAW.TOOLTIPS.DON'T.COMPLAIN)
  
• I faked it, it's not space. It's Alt + 255. U know Triforce right?
  

• Invul will remove most(if not all) buffs placed on the unit, even if it's a debuff/buff.
  

• I'd like to change the lolololololong tooltips -> mid aerial cross slash or something but some dumbfucks may understand it the wrong way (FU FF7)
  

• It's damage type, not attack type.
  
• Discussion regarding the matter is taken place at the top of the post.
  

• The critical part is the Blizzard's mechanic, no need to show it.
  
• Does she gain the effect from this passive when she's on ranged mode? Same question for the passive above.
  
• She'll have 1-(1- item's evasion)*(1-skill's effect) % to evade (on normal condition). Just saying.
  

• Guns and bullets unless modified, are the same. Pros make it lethal by hitting lethal spots. This is a physical matter, not magical. A normal bullet comes from a M1911 pistol can barely pierce through a human body or two. Not like i'm against the idea or anything, but the description is too mythical.
  
• The bullet's MS is? I suggest making it slower each time it hits.
  
• AoE ?
  

• Damge type -> Mixed. BTW , it's magical damage, not spell.
  
• Holy wall of text. Thank god i had my coke.
  
• Move the *** amount of hits to the chance of performing the skill. Like 30% chance on the next physical attacks within 10s will occur First Dance, dealing 6 hits.
  
• Effect tooltips is tooooooo long. If you followed my advice above -> [FD] deals *** damage/hit, [SD] deals *** damage/hit, [TD] deals *** damage/hit. Final Blow deals **% of target's max HP.
  
• Debuff lasts for ? Combine two last line -> Affected unit will be placed with a debuff that amplifies damage from Scarlet Dance by 20%.
  

Aria looks at T.K's unlimited cartridges.
Aria feels sad.
T.K showed his special trick to unlimited cartridges : ↑↑↓↓→←→←BA Select Start.

Background Story:
Kanzaki H. Aria, a.k.a.
Sherlock Holmes the 4th, is a female transfer student at Butei High
School. In which she is an "Assault" department elite rank S (The highest rank) Butei. She can dual-wield either firearms or swords, earning her the title "Quadra".
Her firearm of choice is the M1911 pistol, a.k.a Colt Government, while the Japanese "Kodachi" swords are her favorite melee weapon. Her
main goal is to defeat the IU and exonerate her mother.

Default Skill: Weapon Swap [Active][Damage Type: None]
As Aria is a S rank in Butei with the title of Quadra, she can either duel-wield the M1191 pistols or the Japanese Kodachi swords at a single time, giving her the tactical advantage by being able to switch weapons depending on the circumstances.

1st Skill Ranged Form: Aria's Burst/Aria's Explosion/Explosion Shot [Active][Damage Type: Physical]
Aria
takes 0.2 seconds to deploy explosives on the ground, then jumps backwards and shoots at the explosives in midair, causing an immediate explosion, dealing damage in
the target area, all this happening within another 0.6 seconds

1st Skill Melee Form: Multiform Slash [Active][Damage Type: Physical]
Wielding
both Kodachi, Aria becomes unimaginably agile, not only in terms of
movement but in the speed of her strikes as well. Aria is able to
perform a double slash in front of her, with such speed, that it's
comparable to the speed of sound itself and enemies will barely notice
who or what just hit them.

2nd Skill Ranged Form: Concentration [Active][Damage Type: None]
After years of training, Aria has become a remarkably skilled marksman. However when she focuses to concentrate, she is able to increase her rate of fire tremendously. As a result of which, no opponent can hope to best Aria when she is concentrating.

2nd Skill Melee Form: Self-Confidence [Active][Damage Type: None]
As
a Butei S rank member, Aria has been trained to succeed in everything. It was taught that when one is faced with an unfair amount of opponents, you have to become stronger then them all together. In order to apply this, Aria goes
beyond her limits when fighting, to achieve the victory and to show them
all that failure is not an option.

3rd Skill Ranged Form: Tactical Shot [Passive][Damage Type: None]
When
Aria entered Butei, she was recruited into Elite Assault
Department. After the years of endless aiming training, her accuracy with a gun surpassed everyone's imagination, enabling her to hit her targets' weakspots with great ease, paralyzing them for a moment.

3rd Skill Melee Form: Disarm [Passive][Damage Type: None]
Aria usually uses her M1911 pistols to fight, she does occasionally use her twin Kodachis, which gave her the Quadra title. One of the many techniques that she has mastered, is one that disables a target, rendering it unable to fight back for awhile.

Ultimate Ranged Form: The Scarlet Bullet [Active][Damage Type: Chaos, Uknown]
In dire situations, Aria is able to harness the power of the scarlet bullet to her advantage. Using herself as a conduit, the energy from the bullet channels through her and is projected out of her gun.

Ultimate Melee Form: Lethal Stealth [Active][Damage Type: Physical]
A red mist briefly surrounds Aria, hiding her presence from enemies, while allowing her to move at speeds rivaling the speed of light. Once Aria breaks invisibility to attack an enemy, she will no longer be hidden but her target will be stunned by the suddenness and ferocity of the deadly blow.

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