[Hidan No Aria] Jeanne D'Arc

Jeanne D'Arc the Frozen Beauty

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Background Story:
Jeanne d'Arc the 30th (aka Durandal / Diamond Dust Witch) is an ice attribute ability user from the organization IU. She is one of the few people that knows Kinji's secret. Her personality is serious and cool. Jeanne is quite extraordinary in terms of fighting skills, beauty and ability. But, unexpectedly, her drawing skills are lackluster. Despite her battle strength, she alleges that she is the weakest of all the members in IU. Since she is an ice ability user, she can freeze various things.

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Attack Range: 128 (Melee)

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Extra Information:
Movement Speed: 300 MS
Attack Animation: 0,4 / 0,6
Casting animation: 0,4 / 0,6
Base Attack Time: 1,5

Default Skill: Frozen Field [Active][Damage Type: Magic]
Jeanne bends down, then she touches the ground with her left hand in order to turn it almost instantly into an inoffensive frozen field, or that's what enemies would think, till they were able to see once you step into frozen field you had lost all your movement control.
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Units when trying to move within FF will be forced to move toward the direction they're facing at random MS (100~500).
Everytime a non-allied unit moves 150 range due to FF's effect, stuns it for 1 second.
Allied units slide with random MS until they reach the end point of the AoE.
Does not affect Jeanne.
800 AoE around Jeanne.
Lasts 8 Seconds.
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Cooldown: 20 Seconds.

Detailed Information:
Instant Targetting Type.
Takes 0,075 Seconds to freeze 100 AoE.
Casting Time is 0,25 Seconds.
FF idea taken from Slide Ninja Slide .

1st Skill: Rising Icicles [Active][Damage Type: Magic]
Jeanne raises her sword, being able to convert her inoffensive Frozen Field into a deadly trap formed by Ice Spikes which will pierce her enemies into pieces negating their regeneration.
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Deals damage to non-allied units in Frozen Field and negates their HP Regen converting it into Damage.
Debuff lasts 6 seconds.
Requires Frozen Field activated.
Requires to be in Frozen Field to cast it.
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Lvl 1: Deals 300 Damage, negates HP Regen and deals 2x times Negated HP regen damage every second.
Lvl 2: Deals 550 Damage, negates HP Regen and deals 2,5x times Negated HP regen damage every second.
Lvl 3: Deals 800 Damage, negates HP Regen and deals 3x times Negated HP regen damage every second.
Lvl 4: Deals 1050 Damage, negates HP Regen and deals 3,5x times Negated HP regen damage every second.
Lvl 5: Deals 1300 Damage, negates HP Regen and deals 4x times Negated HP regen damage every second.

Cooldown: 20/22/24/26/28 Seconds.

Detailed Information:
Once casted, spikes last 0,25 Seconds.
When spikes are destroyed Frozen Field will be removed not slowing anymore.
This skill negates/deals item regeneration (damage).
E.G.:
Yuuji's Passive HP Regen -> 5 hp/s
Yuuji's Item HP Regen -> 40 hp/s (2 Hp Orb)
Skill Effect -> Yuuji's Regen -45 hp/s (HP Regen = 0) and takes 45x4 Damage/second.

2nd Skill: Durandal [Active][Damage Type: Magic]
Durandal, a mystical sword obtained by means of showing her value with Ice element based Spells, which improves drastically the ice powers of its user and steals the enemies' soul depriving them of any hope to survive.
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Each attack steals the target's AS by 10%. Lasts 8 Seconds.
Slows target's MS by 25%. Lasts 3 seconds.
Passively increases Ice Spells Damage.
Orb Effects do not stack.
Buff Placers do not stack.
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Lvl 1: Adds 70 cold damage to every attack, steals up to 20% AS. Passively grants 10% Ice Spell Damage.
Lvl 2: Adds 90 cold damage to every attack, steals up to 40% AS. Passively grants 15% Ice Spell Damage.
Lvl 3: Adds 110 cold damage to every attack, steals up to 60% AS. Passively grants 20% Ice Spell Damage.
Lvl 4: Adds 130 cold damage to every attack, steals up to 80% AS. Passively grants 25% Ice Spell Damage.
Lvl 5: Adds 150 cold damage to every attack, steals up to 100% AS. Passively grants 30% Ice Spell Damage.

Cooldown: 30 Seconds.

Detailed Information:
Cold Damage will trigger 0,1 seconds after every normal attack.
Slow does not stack.
Steals AS up to 20%*Skill's lvl from the target.
Adds up to 20%*Skill's lvl to Jeanne's AS.

3rd Skill: Chilling Presence [Passive][Damage Type: Magic]
Jeanne's heart is cold as ice, so her head and sword are, due to that, she detaches a freezing aura around her, disturbing nearby enemies, while they suffer cold damage at the same time they learn the valuable lesson to not play with Ice.
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Deals Minor DPS around Jeanne.
Slows enemies MS.
Slows enemies' turn by 50%.
700 AoE around Jeanne.
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Lvl 1: Deals 40 DPS and slows MS by 8%.
Lvl 2: Deals 60 DPS and slows MS by 11%.
Lvl 3: Deals 80 DPS and slows MS by 14%.
Lvl 4: Deals 100 DPS and slows MS by 17%.
Lvl 5: Deals 120 DPS and slows MS by 20%.

Detailed Information:
Enemies' turn means whenever an enemy unit tries to face another direction, they take 50% extra time to do it.
DPS Stacks with Ice Storm.

Ultimate: Ice Storm [Active][Damage Type: Magic]
Jeanne plunges her sword into the ground, accumulating her power for a moment, then releasing it without mercy in the shape of a huge Ice Storm which will hit all nearby enemies, turning them into ice.
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1 Second Casting Time.
Channeling.
1000 AoE around Jeanne.
Freezes 0,1 seconds for every 0,1 seconds enemies are within Ice Storm.
Lasts 3 Seconds.
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Lvl 1: Deals 600 damage per second, slows MS by 20% and AS by 30%.
Lvl 2: Deals 1000 damage per second, slows MS by 30% and AS by 45%.
Lvl 3: Deals 1400 damage per second, slows MS by 40% and AS by 60%.

Cooldown: 140/130/120 Seconds.

Detailed Information:
Slow Stacks with Durandal and Chilling Presence.
Enemies will be frozen once Ice Storm ends or when they move away from its range.
DPS Stacks with Chilling Presence.

Credits:
Thanks to OmegaSui for helping me a lot to improve this request.
Original Frozen Field idea taken from Slide Ninja Slide, with help from OmegaSui.
Feel free to comment this request!

I'm really really really sad to do this to this cute girl that looks like Extra Saber + Saber + White hair but, sent to rule violated section until either 2 of your suggestions being accepted or declined.

Remember to contact Omega or me once the other suggestion is done XD

Edit: Nvm, rules changed.

• Saber's clone, pfffffffftt
  
• Too much images of the hero(ine), but there's no image whatsoever about the skills?
  

Default skill
_Frozen Field :

• Description, as i know of, should be trivia about the skill , or just plain description on how it works in anime. So the game related terms such as heroes and HP shouldn't be used in the description.
  
• It freezes slowly ? qth.
  
• That little amount equals 600~800 dmg, which is not little at all.
  
• Make it target type instant -> voila, screw the ".....placed location......".
  

1st skill
_Rising Icicles :

• I was like 'huh wtf" with the tooltips.
  

• Enemies that enter Frozen Field before spikes are destroyed still take damage.
  

  Meaning....?
  

2nd skill
_Durandal :

• "Mystical", not " mytical"
  
• Unneeded tooltips.
  
• What lasts 12 seconds? the debuff? the durandal ?
  
• OE and BP warning should be separated.
  
• It uses ladder's orb so obviously it will hard-code triggered, and yes they will never have stacked effect so lolololol detail info ain't needed.
  

3rd skill
_Chilling Presence :

• Resistance towards ice spells ? This is not a rpg map where they uses damage type constants -> elemental. So that or just increases her spell damage equally.
  
• 150 DPS on 700 AoE r u insane ?!
  

Ultimate
_Ice Storm :

• Unneeded tooltips and confusing.
  
• This is like a lesser Miku's ultimate (2s of freeze = 2s of stun, channeling, dps)
  
• Idk make it lasts shorter, have effect to slowly reduces affected non-allied units' MS and AS by ?%, OR when the storm is gone they will be frozen with duration equally to the amount of time they got pwned in the ice storm (say you stay in the storm for 1.38545s , you will be frozen for 1.38545s in the aftermath)
  
• Freeze is hard-coded. No need to explain.
  

Updated, check first post for more information.

lol,, it's really saber's clone FTWWW

Updated, check first post for more information.

Actually, i took it from The Black Road ORPG, where it's forced. Slide ninja slide can change direction, and i was using that as the reference in case u dont play tbr. Not like it matters , just pointing out some all most useless information.

Descriptions TOTALLY changed, to fix them was not possible... xD

EDIT: Btw stop saying it's a Saber's copy, because we all know when Saber begins to channel her Excalibur, Jeanne will have killed her more than 3 times...

*Saber begins to channel Excalibur*
*Jeanne D'Arc uses Frozen Field -Time to slide-*
*Saber uses Excalibur* Saber: What the fuck, how you dare to troll me!
Jeanne: You are just a stupid girl, you are not even a Lolie! Try to kill me, if you can...
*Saber steps into Frozen Field* Saber: Ah What the hell, I cannot control myself *Saber fell, and got hit into her face lol*
*Jeanne uses Rising Icicles*
*Saber has been killed by Jeanne*

*Saber begins to rage* Saber: Die Die Die!!
Jeanne: Koroste, Koroste, KOROSTE. (Kill me, kill me, kill me if you can)
*Saber performs a penta slash followed by two twin slashes* Saber: WTF??
*Jeanne ran away, avoiding every slash, freezing and damaging Saber with her lame Chilling Presence*
Saber: don't... don't... run...
*Saber has been killed by Jeanne*

Saber: this time I'm gonna kill you!
*Jeanne activated Durandal*
Saber: ahah I got you, AVALON!
Jeanne: .... baka... you cannot move while using Avalon.
Saber: Lol... Fuck this...
*Avalon ended, Jeanne used Ice Storm*
*Saber has been killed by Jeanne*

lol wtf with that 3 times kill conversation

The f* is tat?

Saber's outlook clone - Jeanne DPS'arc
Reki is liek Yuki
Shirayuki is like a random yandere shrine girl.
Riko is a random psychopath w/o noticable traits.
Aria , tsundere.

hmmm

^ see that? utter BS. learn 2 categorize.

Riko = FCKIN BAWSS.

But yea aria dont embarass urself >.>. Saber wuld rape every character in HnA instantly >.>.

Saber wuld rape every character in HnA

I'd love to see that.

I also agree that F/SN is better than HnA(wait is this really a suggestion discussion?)

No. Now u fags should comment on my awesome idea to use slide from Slide Ninja Slide !

Wasn't it aria's idea? and xD

Jeanne Hidden skill : Drawing
Jeanne draws a picture of a bear and asks the enemy to guess. If he/she get's it wrong Jeanne will instagib the whole enemy team. If he/she get's it right Jeanne will betray her teammate.

xDD I'd say her drawing skills are as good as rukia's lololol

U probably didn't read everything.

Hidden skill only attained from killing miniboss.

the ulti needs to do 90000000000 more damage. maybe it wouldnt suck as much anymore.

3 s stun doesnt satisfy u ?